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February 3, 2024
Placed 1st: Pick-A-Title, Vol. 41 Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Edward Ibeh


 

Inner Sanctum

Privileged is the right of ingress, bearing your beloved name, 
To chambers of your heart, where burns a sacred flame,
Of inner sanctum divine, in sanctity of a heavenly place,
Strumming beats esoteric, vying ataraxis of ethereal grace.

Reserved for you and I, is a secret temple, tolling solace,
Where love and life embrace, in a sanctuary pure, flawless;
Where the bells echo, beckoning will of empathetic mind,
Affirming proclivity for affinity, aligned with motives kind.

When solitary thoughts linger on a grievous path of life,
When hurdles, detours of past, manifest anguish of strife,
When hurricanes and storms churn in destructive tides,
To shores of peace and tranquility, inner sanctum guides.

When life drives rudderless, perturbed in dubious plight,
Harmony of sapience and prudence transmit inner light,
Spurring verse of wisdom, as missives enlightened chime, 
Defying apathy and ignorance, honoring virtues sublime.

Only you and I can soothe, troubled tears of grieved sigh,
Only you and I can fill voids, when vacuously life goes awry,
As dialogue of reason and intellect inner sanctum revives
Empowering thoughts so inspired, where sagacity thrives.
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Baker Avatar
February 22, 2024 at 4:09 PM
Powerful imagery and a poem filled with reverence and wisdom. A FAV for my list, my dear friend. I'm catching up on poems I've missed from my favorite poets today and am blessed to have found this masterpiece. I see below that congratulations are in order for a contest winning poem. Congrats Vijay, a well-deserved win. Have a great weekend! Bill
Ibeh Avatar
February 10, 2024 at 11:13 AM
A masterpiece and a fave, Vijay. Congratulations on your top win in my contest!
Sands Avatar
February 7, 2024 at 12:44 PM
Wow. This poem is brilliant, inspiring with depth and wisdom. A Fave for me Vijay! :)
Williams Avatar
February 7, 2024 at 2:33 AM
Your profound write resounds with love, peace and harmony. I do admire your thoughts and how you have expressed them. A FAVE. Hugs Maria
Nicole Avatar
February 6, 2024 at 2:49 PM
' Where love and life embrace, in a sanctuary that's pure and flawless. ' This is the definition of true happiness. Your thoughts hold beauty, romance and tender moments. Soothing each other in troubled times, that's unconditional love, indeed. My best to you, Vijay. Hugs, Brandy
Kendrick Avatar
February 6, 2024 at 6:16 AM
Yes, a couple in love do know how to sooth each other's troubles away even if only for a short time. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K
Rose  Avatar
February 5, 2024 at 12:43 PM
I always thrive when I read the sanctity of your sacred words, Vijay, perfectedly good !
Buhagiar Avatar
February 5, 2024 at 11:15 AM
Wonderful metaphoric romantic poem, Adorned with brilliant imagery. Best for a win.
Buehler Avatar
February 3, 2024 at 5:08 PM
Very romantic and beautiful, with exquisite, haunting images. Best of luck for a win. :)
One Avatar
February 3, 2024 at 10:46 AM
Vijay my friend your poem resonates with a profound sense of reverence and intimacy, painting a vivid portrait of a sacred sanctuary where love and understanding reign supreme. The imagery of the heart as a secret temple, reserved for the beloved, evokes a sense of sacredness and exclusivity, where the flames of affection burn brightly amidst the tranquil chambers of the soul. Best of luck in the contest..
Narain Avatar
February 3, 2024 at 10:09 AM
A sanctuary for pure love. Nicely penned.
Empress Avatar
February 3, 2024 at 8:40 AM
Ah dear vijay, another exquisite poem that flows with romance and heartfelt emotions, i always love your romantic poems, and they are soulful and your rhymes are as always so mellifluous! So stunning! And i cant help but admire the way youve written “ Reserved for you and I, is a secret temple, tolling solace, Where love and life embrace, in a sanctuary pure, flawless;” how divine and profound is the way you weave thoughts. the ending hits deep as I believe love can save all.Hits home! BOL.
M  Avatar
February 3, 2024 at 8:12 AM
Pure utter love and romance Vijay…..so incredibly beautiful!! Debx
Sharma  Avatar
February 3, 2024 at 7:42 AM
Gosh, this is a beautifully deep and reflective piece that explores the dimension of a love, which is both healing and possesses a sacred quality of guidance.. These words reflect pure wisdom and how evocatively you've described that life doesn't always remain shiny, it has its own darkness at times and I'm those moments, the flame of faith, burning in our inner sanctum, shows us the way. I love so many lines here especially "Only you and I can soothe, troubled tears of grieved sigh" Beautiful!
Canerdy Avatar
February 3, 2024 at 6:19 AM
Vijay, this masterpiece vividly describes the sanctuary that true love is for some. Janice
Cunningham Avatar
February 3, 2024 at 5:48 AM
This is poetry on another level, brilliant writing Vijay. Often we overlook the fact that it is within ourselves that we find real peace, our own personal sanctuary. Good luck in the contest and enjoy your weekend. Tom
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