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Drawn to the edge of the water in concert with the moon tides ebbing, flowing, tasting, smelling, feeling, hearing, waves of the sea crashing, salty, wet, transporting me— Inner peace Inner peace transporting me— crashing, salty, wet, waves of the sea feeling, hearing, tasting, smelling, tides ebbing, flowing in concert with the moon Drawn to the edge of the water *** This is also an example of a reverse poem. A reverse poem is a poem that can be read forwards (top to bottom) and have one meaning but can also be read backwards (bottom to top). It does not have to rhyme and doesn't have to have an opposite meaning when read from bottom to top. It DOES need to make sense when reading it backwards, however.

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Date: 6/17/2022 7:32:00 PM
Mark you taught me something new again.. I didn't know why I liked it so much the repeating... ing.... Then you explained. Poem and photo great.
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Mark Toney
Date: 6/19/2022 2:48:00 PM
I hope you weren't dizzy going forward then backward :) Sometimes I am!
Date: 6/28/2021 8:57:00 AM
Love the write and picture. Wish I was walking on the sand. Have blessed day....................
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Mark Toney
Date: 6/28/2021 10:35:00 AM
Thank you, Paula. I wish I was walking on the sand too :)
Date: 6/9/2021 10:28:00 AM
I like it Mark! Smart job!
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Mark Toney
Date: 6/10/2021 11:49:00 AM
Thank you, Smita. You made my day!

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