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kohl eyed crust e r u p t s like molten t r e m o r s of heart ~ inner inferno

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Duke Beaufort

Date: 5/3/2025 10:07:00 AM

IE, this is very interesting to contemplate. When the kohl-eyed crust erupts, the structure of the poem does literally flow downhill. I'm wondering if it includes tears of sadness as well as heart-felt pain. I'm thinking of all the times I've felt hurt and then anger at not getting what I wanted in terms of affection or recognition. That is a very painful thing to experience, and it did lead to difficulty coping with daily life. I'm really glad those days of eruptions are over. Fortunately, there is a way to think about it all and not let what happened in the past interfere with the present. It takes a lot of thought to get to that point and being able to focus on being kind to others. I hope you are in a good state and wish to send a smile. Cheers!!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/1/2025 9:25:00 AM

Creative work. I hope that a volcano doesn't erupt and spread molten lava but now that molten chocolate cake can be a wonderful treat. Reads like a winner if for a contest. Way to go. Sara K

Yann Rolland

Date: 5/1/2025 3:27:00 AM

great sensitivity, and emotional haiku, enjoyed

Joe Dimino

Date: 4/30/2025 7:09:00 AM

Reminds me of my Pompeii days. Reincarnated memory. God willing, no loss of life -- stuff can be replaced. May have a winner here, outrageously well done!

Tom Woody

Date: 4/30/2025 6:02:00 AM

Nothing more painful than an eruption of the heart... due to grief or loss. Nice one Inky

Paige Hind

Date: 4/29/2025 9:31:00 PM

Wow. I love your haikus, yours are the best. <3

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/29/2025 4:14:00 PM

Oh my. It took me a while to figure out the word "erupts" haha. It's so great how stylistically you do these. I need to get one up quick

Lioness Onpaper

Date: 4/29/2025 12:04:00 PM

Oooo erupting molten lava cake !!!! But kohl!!! Love it!!! For some reason um thinking dark dark dark ooozing chocolate molten lava cake now!!!!

Lin Lane

Date: 4/29/2025 11:55:00 AM

It looks all downhill from here. Not your Hiku, that imminent eruption. ;-)

Ink Empress
Date: 5/1/2025 7:55:00 AM

Haha dear linnersz, thank you also for suggesting " eyed" i appreciate your kind support, you are an amazin poetess painter proofreader all the P's! So grateful

Di11y Da11y

Date: 4/29/2025 11:47:00 AM

How amazing is this! I'm getting on this hiku train :)

Ink Empress
Date: 5/1/2025 7:54:00 AM

Im so glad youv also joined the hiku project haha thank you so much

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/29/2025 11:20:00 AM

What a creative Haiku write. Love It.... Few words with much said. Have a fun day writing away...............

Ink Empress
Date: 5/1/2025 7:52:00 AM

Thank you sweet paula appreciate your support always