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Inner Anguish

Two men sitting on a stoop Day dawning as the rush of cars drive by Drinking coffee from Styrofoam cups One old, one young, they discuss the weather Air already warm before the sun has even risen Not a cloud in the sky to promise rain Old woman pushing a shopping cart passed the men Old man nods his head as she shuffles by All her belongings crammed into black garbage bags Girl in scrubs waiting at the corner bus stop Boy in jeans, backpack hangs off one shoulder Looks about his neighborhood with hooded eyes Yesterday’s newspaper lays abandoned on the bench Headlines read Economy in Constant Decline No change to the everyday existence in the inner city

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/24/2010 10:44:00 AM
Dear Lena: Great poem and what an intersting way of expressing the mundane in such a poetic way, BRAVO!!! Thank you 4 taking the time 2 read and comment on my poem. Yours truly: Sheol
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Date: 8/15/2009 8:17:00 AM
enjoyed this one , the message so quitely put, but strong at the same time thanks for the write, Johnathon
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Date: 8/14/2009 10:06:00 PM
Great imagery here, Lena! I wrote one called The Bag Lady that this reminds me of. So glad you've brought your talent to the Soup!!
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Date: 8/10/2009 1:58:00 AM
Lena, You've said it like is is!!! Very nice poetic social comentary. And life goes on... Love, Dane
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Date: 8/9/2009 11:10:00 AM
It is Sunday afternoon here and I am so happy to share this time reading your fantastic poetry Lena. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/8/2009 8:28:00 PM
Vivid and compelling images of a neighborhood stricken by the economic slump that has spread throughout our nation. Very nicely crafted using individuals to illustrate the daily occurrences of inner city life. You made it personal -- very creative touch! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/8/2009 8:19:00 PM
Hello Lena, this is quite a wonderful poem. It describes the inner city very well. Well done. BG
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Date: 8/8/2009 8:18:00 PM
poetic commentary, Lena, well penned! jim
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