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This poem written for and submitted to "2025 Poetry Marathon Mile 25" poetry contest, Mark Toney, sponsor, October 29, 2025.

INKWELL REVERIE

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A stray eyelash drifts onto the page~ this poem began as a grocery list. Milk, eggs, then why do stars collapse? The pen pauses. Words are slippery trout in a shallow creek. I chase them barefoot, bruising toes on stubborn stones. Sometimes they leap into my cupped hands, gleaming. Other times? Silence. Just the clock’s metronome and the stubborn drip from the kitchen tap. Still, I return. The list can wait.
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Ashley Avatar
January 2, 2026 at 6:48 AM
Dear Sara, belated congratulations for your success in Mark's contest with this exceptional poem. You capture the essence of poetic inspiration and creation with a potent mix of delightful imagery, reality, whimsy and artistic finesse! Warmest wishes to you and Bill for a happy new year, my dear poet friend.. ~Susan
Famuyiwa Avatar
November 2, 2025 at 8:51 AM
I love you beautifully play with your words. Congratulations.
George Avatar
November 2, 2025 at 2:47 AM
'Words are slippery trout in a shallow creek'.... What original analogy and how true !. This time' they have leaped into your cupped hands and they have brought for you a fortune. Congratulations dear Sara on your prestigious win with a crisp, catchy poem.
Toney Avatar
November 1, 2025 at 12:17 PM
Sara, I love your witty metaphor, “Words are slippery trout in a shallow creek. I chase them barefoot, bruising toes on stubborn stones. Sometimes they leap into my cupped hands, gleaming.” You’ve captured what all poets experience—our normal duties of life preempted when the muse strikes! A Fav poem for me. Congratulations on your second place win on Mile 25 of my 2025 Poetry Marathon Contest. Keep your running shoes on, because Mile 26 has already started. Only 1 mile to go before the Qualifiers’ Final Placement contest!
Gauthier Avatar
October 31, 2025 at 2:57 PM
Beautiful ~ a delight to read
Hind Avatar
October 30, 2025 at 5:36 PM
I know what you're writing about! Blessings to your muse
Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 31, 2025 at 5:15 AM
thank you, Paige. My muse is blossoming.
Swan Avatar
October 30, 2025 at 4:37 AM
A laugh and a delight too. I love the switch between the groceries and the universe, and the slippery word-fish. Fave. J :)
Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 31, 2025 at 5:16 AM
thanks for your visit, Jeanette and your kind comments. Humbly grateful for your fave!
Rodrigues Avatar
October 29, 2025 at 6:14 PM
Yes, the pen! We get diverted as poets. On the trail…
Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 31, 2025 at 5:16 AM
yes, we do get diverted...it's both a blessing and a curse, hugs, Sara
Achara Avatar
October 29, 2025 at 3:10 PM
Love it!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 31, 2025 at 5:16 AM
many thanks for your visit and comments today
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