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Inklings of Spring

Winter finally moves his lumpen sluggish weight, Spring is like a shy dryad shivering in his arms Wind's whippets droop to trifling whine Sullen rain hisses to a grizzle. tiny fruit buds swell enough to moisten lips. First daffodil maidens preen, bright faces so fair! Chattering swallows check granite grey mortared mansion. Duck naps snug, beak a chest --- gull floats overhead. Longer days mean I must leave my snuggly, sleepy daze, slightly more light; work energies reappear poetry is laid aside in favour of trimming trees seething solar heating sound, signals dimly smiling sun. seed packets eagerly spread out – What to plant this season? Suddenly, more bees aflight – our crops will be alright! Another cycle begins! 1) Anthropomorphism 2) Simile 3) Metaphor 4) onomatopoeia 5)Synaesthesia 6) Personification 7) Sensory Imagery 8) Ellipsis 9) Homophone 10) Caesura 11) Pun 12) Alliteration 13) Rhetorical Question 14)Internal Rhyme 15) Truism Written 20th August for Line Gautier Contest - A Litany of Poetic Devices

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Date: 9/14/2018 5:34:00 AM
great job! I know this wasn't easy,, you did t with such ease...congrats Sweet Virginia:)-luloo
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Date: 9/15/2018 2:20:00 AM
haha - no ease involved AT ALL!
Date: 9/13/2018 2:16:00 PM
Congrats on your well penned top winning poem, Virginia. I loved the theme. It will be a welcome addition to the anthology project. Your examples of poetic devices were presented in a cohesive and exquisite package. Well done.
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Date: 9/15/2018 2:19:00 AM
Thank you Line -you stretched me. Was funny I had this great line and thought - bugger can't use it already done that one. Then I smacked myself on head - duh was a metaphor not personification!
Date: 9/13/2018 1:38:00 PM
Being lily-livered, I cowered away from this challenge but you have created such a clever compilation of devices, Virginia! If anyone deserves virtual trophies it's for this demanding but no doubt fulfilling contest! Bravo!
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Date: 9/15/2018 2:16:00 AM
Took a lot of effort but learnt much in the doing- which is the true reward.
Date: 8/26/2018 9:29:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. This is hard to do and yours is exceptionally beautiful.
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Date: 8/28/2018 12:38:00 AM
It was hard and didn't seem any good while was doing but seems others like = thank you
Date: 8/26/2018 4:44:00 PM
Such lovely imagery of Spring, Virginia, using the poetic devices so well! Congratulations on your placement, and best wishes for Line's contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 8/28/2018 12:37:00 AM
Thanks - think I have learnt more about poetry doing Line's stuff than at school - in fact - definitely have. Great learning motivation.
Date: 8/25/2018 4:45:00 PM
Just lovely Virginia, congrats :)
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Date: 8/28/2018 12:35:00 AM
thank you sir.
Date: 8/25/2018 6:41:00 AM
Congratulations, Virginia! ...Fran
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Virginia Waters
Date: 8/28/2018 12:34:00 AM
thanks mate - appreciated

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