Inkless Thoughts-Ty

heathered
weathered
feathered
tethered
you are but a heathered thought, weathered
through the flow of feathered pen, tethered 



August 6, 2019
Tyburn Contest
Sponsored by Charles Messina



Thank you Gershon and Line for the discussions about the tyburn and your thoughts... much appreciated!
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Dietrich Avatar
September 1, 2019 at 7:05 PM
outstanding one, Sandy. Congrats and hope you are enjoying your day
Messina Avatar
August 31, 2019 at 5:44 AM
Great tyburn Sandra. Your feathered pen flowed brilliantly! Congratulations on your win in my contest. As always..Poetry hugs Charlie :)
Adams Avatar
August 31, 2019 at 6:12 AM
Thank you Charlie for the honor of the win and for hosting another wonderful contest, through you I learned how to pen a new form :) hugs
Andresen Avatar
August 30, 2019 at 7:38 AM
- Congratulations on your great Tyburn poem, Sandra :) - hugs and happy weekend // Anne-Lise :)
Adams Avatar
August 30, 2019 at 8:05 AM
Thank you my friend... enjoy your weekend as well :) hugs
Faulkner Avatar
August 9, 2019 at 2:29 PM
So gracefully penned, this should top the winner's list!
Adams Avatar
August 9, 2019 at 6:20 PM
Thank you so much Michelle :) hugs
Lee Sr. Avatar
August 6, 2019 at 7:13 PM
Another stellar write Good luck on both contest... James
Adams Avatar
August 6, 2019 at 8:13 PM
Thank you so much James :) hugs
Wolf Avatar
August 6, 2019 at 3:53 PM
Tyburn or no tyburn, this is GOOD! :) gw
Wolf Avatar
August 6, 2019 at 8:16 PM
Not only is it 'fixed,' but 'heathered' is a great choice, methinks. Best of luck in the contest. :) gw
Adams Avatar
August 6, 2019 at 8:15 PM
Thank you Gershon....i think it's fixed correctly now from what i am understanding of the form :) hugs
Wolf Avatar
August 6, 2019 at 5:50 PM
Truth be told, a number of mine were a bit off-form. Only one or two were done correctly... my comment holds nonetheless. I like yours a lot! Best wishes, gw
Adams Avatar
August 6, 2019 at 4:24 PM
Thank you Gershon, i believe you penned a few of these that i commented on and i was trying to guess at how it was done without reading up on it....i appreciate your kind comments always :) hugs
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 6, 2019 at 3:28 PM
Hello Sandra Adams, I have only done the Tyburn once. I still have not got the hang of it. One day I will try again. You did a great job. It is nice to meet you. Have a nice day my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 6, 2019 at 4:55 PM
I will and the same to you my friend.
Adams Avatar
August 6, 2019 at 3:33 PM
Thank you Darlene, i don't play with many forms on my own, therefore the contests are always fun because they make me think outside my box of free verse! Nice to meet you :) enjoy your day my friend!
Gauthier Avatar
August 6, 2019 at 2:43 PM
OMG - so that's what a good tyburn is supposed to read like! Thank you, Sandra.
Adams Avatar
August 6, 2019 at 4:24 PM
Thank you so much for the honor... :) hugs
Gauthier Avatar
August 6, 2019 at 3:59 PM
Had to come back any FAVE.
Adams Avatar
August 6, 2019 at 3:01 PM
I don't know Line, I never penned one before...just a guess on the form from what i read.... thanks for your wonderful comment :) hugs
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