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Inheritance


In this quiet room
I will hear my mother's words
frayed from years of missing her


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6/27/16
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Dietrich Avatar
July 6, 2016 at 6:08 PM
This is fantastic. I am loving this winner list!! Congrats, Carrie
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 5, 2016 at 11:44 AM
This is lovely Carrie. Congratulations on a well-deserved win! 7 ; )
Onclaud Avatar
July 2, 2016 at 1:13 PM
ohh carrie, finest nostalgia that comes alive... big cheers on your shining glory and thanks for supporting my contest.. huggs
Callus Avatar
July 2, 2016 at 10:11 AM
A touching and unique take with a perfect ending, Carrie! Congratulations on this high finish. // paul
Raina Avatar
June 27, 2016 at 11:11 PM
Very nice Carrie, ....I like the last line...
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