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Inherent Energy

Trains, planes and automobiles all require fuel But the best form of transportation was a gift from God Clad in socks, abused on jogs, squeezed into heels When it comes to moving people, let's give feet the nod Energy is something we had, not purchased So let's take a few steps back in history In olden days, we walked where we wanted to go Let's prove we can get around without an Energizer battery

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Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 8/13/2010 3:29:00 AM

Yup, we should definitely keep walking-- healthier too! Congrats on your win again, Carolyn! -- nikko :)

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 8/9/2010 4:53:00 PM

hmmm I don't think they will walk or go batteriless? unless they are forced t...good win & idea here! Light & Love

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/9/2010 9:07:00 AM

Congratulations Carolyn on your win in Barbara Gorelick's contest "Your Favorite Form Of Transportation". Love, Carol

Brandee Augustus

Date: 8/8/2010 8:44:00 PM

Awesome! I'm glad that walking got another nod in this contest. Congratulations on your honourable mention and thanks for honouring me with your comments.

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 8/7/2010 4:07:00 PM

Very clever, Carolyn and congratulations on your HM

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/6/2010 9:39:00 PM

Very good way to remember about getting back to basics, Carolyn and congrats for this! LUv, Andrea

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/5/2010 9:47:00 PM

Congrats on your HM win, Carolyn

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 8/5/2010 9:27:00 PM

soup mail.. congrats LNC..BG

Gert W. Knop

Date: 8/4/2010 6:44:00 AM

Great write, Carolyn! That is exactly what i did in the past when being much younger and walked for about 20 miles and more! Still doing well with walking and I don't really need 'energy' for that! Enjoyed the read and thank you for commenting "Tanzend"! If you'd like have a ook also at my facebook album...All the best! Love, Gert

Timothy Brumley

Date: 8/3/2010 7:43:00 AM

And don't forget those hand gliders!:) Actually, I would have thought that an angel would have little need for mechanized flight:)....... Where would we be without feet? Probably right next door to the thumb less! This may sound strange, but I kinda miss ya already..........your silence has become deafening! Good luck in the contest!

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 8/2/2010 2:59:00 PM

lol, thanks for this wonderful read today.. hope your trip went well... Always Michael

Lynette Chachere

Date: 8/2/2010 2:02:00 PM

haha, that would be great, then we all would be getting the proper excercise we need, after all, we are born with this 'energy', lets use it.great point there(: ~Always&Forever

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/2/2010 5:55:00 AM

I just might need the battery to give me a boost from the sitting position..Good luck in the contest..Sara

Wilma Neels

Date: 8/2/2010 4:53:00 AM

I have to agree with you, I love walking atm that is my mode of transport.. I even do fun walks for charity.. Crazy I know hehe, but soo much fun.. Enjoyed your write, Carolyn, all the best for the contest.. love Wilma

David Byrne

Date: 8/1/2010 7:39:00 PM

I say solar, wind and geothermal energy and we are all laughing!

James Marshall Goff

Date: 8/1/2010 6:32:00 PM

geez, Carolyn, I walked around Lake Calhoun in Minneapolis today (3.4 mi.), boy, was it hot! but the good thing was, the beaches were a bikini paradise! oh boy!!!

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 8/1/2010 6:17:00 PM

good advice, these country miles are rough though. LOL