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Inhaling the Sea

Inured of earthen reveries, Now thoughts unfold of turquoise seas. Heaving swells kiss morning mist As dawn’s enlightened warmth assist, Lifting gray from chartreuse hues, Imbuing skies with silken blues. Neon glints enchant the eye, Gleaning light from algae’s ply. Textured palettes shine below; Hallowed reefs of life encased, Ever housed in sea’s chateau. Sunset couched in ocean sway, Ease from mauve to dusk’s embrace; All my earthbound cares, away. 05 Jul 2014 1 in 4: Choose your Acrostic Title Contest

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Date: 8/2/2014 3:40:00 PM
Thanks so much for the visit and the kind comments Linda...I was out of town for a while so it was wonderful to find a comment from you when I logged in :)
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Date: 7/29/2014 6:36:00 PM
David, a true deep scenario .... Congratulations, on your wonderful win. Always~ LINDA
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Date: 7/22/2014 5:51:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Sara
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Date: 7/18/2014 8:13:00 PM
Oh I loved the acrostic and rhyme, you words shine, loved the line, neon glints enchant the eye, terrific. Well done :)
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Date: 7/18/2014 4:30:00 PM
Excellent write and lovely imagery, David. Congrats on a merited win. // paul
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Date: 7/18/2014 2:28:00 PM
A wonderful win David... PD
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Date: 7/18/2014 8:42:00 AM
Delightful and soothing to read, David. Liquid from beginning to end; beautiful imagery. Congratulations.
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Date: 7/18/2014 8:31:00 AM
I like how you incorporated rhyming, congrats on you win.
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Date: 7/18/2014 7:02:00 AM
Nicely done, such beautiful use of color. congrats. BG
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Date: 7/18/2014 6:31:00 AM
David this is such a soothing piece.. Imagery is amazing my friend. Congrats on a great win! Hugs.. Arlene
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Date: 7/18/2014 12:37:00 AM
Wonderful acrostic David,, congrats on big win!
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Date: 7/17/2014 11:26:00 PM
Beautiful words in this poem and love how you employed punctuation. Big congrats in my contest!
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Date: 7/13/2014 3:55:00 PM
Beautifully descriptive with sensaational ending. Superlative Acrostic, David. bfn Lainie
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Date: 7/5/2014 5:50:00 PM
Wow, I chose the same one..wish I hadn't..this is very good! BG
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