Inhaling the Sea - Lovers In the Lap of Nature

"Inhaling the sea --  Lovers in the lap of 
nature"

Inhaling the sea,
She primed my heart!!

Early morning going onto the sea bed,
My chubby cheeks blushed in red.
Inhaling the breeze, felt so fresh,
By that time, Remembered my Longlasting 
mesh.

That salubrious weather, those scenic 
charm,
Wanted you to be forever in my glorious 
arm.
Ravishing beauty kept my eyes off.

In this pictersque environment,
Everything all around was happening.
Yes, This was the  place where l wed.
Inhaling the sea, feelings came out from 
the deep space of my heart.

This is the place where diara and I met for 
the first time.
She primed my heart.

Embedded mountains, Turquoise blue 
lake,
Don't want to be under impression  which 
was fake.
Ocean of dreams I had,
But she don't entertained me that was 
sad.
But still, She was the Queen of hills of my 
heart.

Morning exercise was only the reason,
Meeting each other every season.
Waves reached to its height,
She use to hug me tight.
With the rising sun and falling sunrise.
Holding her from her back,
Beyond imagination, carried precious 
moments in my sack.

Trying to cope up long miles of 
relationship.
Friction in my soul, asked me to commit 
for marriage.
Emotionally connecting the extreme ends.
Feelings of each other bloomed.
Hugging her, strings of heart played in 
beats.
Felt so blessed, gave me a feeling of 
stardom.

Twilight walk on sea beach,
Soft rays of sun, 
Filling empty heart with joy.
Sweetness of breeze,
Blueness of sky.
Wide flowing beach,
Along with a pretty attractive beauty in 
peach.
Ohhh my icy sugar, You melt my heart.

In an eternal winter,
Frozen soul wrapped each other.
God blessed and  she tagged me as her 
kite runner.
Ohhh my Frankastein, I have got dipped in 
you.

Red sky view, Flying colour of sun and 
relaxed mind,
Stunning beauty, I am sinked in your 
lovely eyes.
Best splendid moments I had being with 
you.
Holding your hand had made a peace and 
harmony of our feeling.

Yes inhaling the sea,
She primed my heart!!


By Madhavi

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 4/1/2014 2:39:00 AM
congratulations madhavi xx
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Date: 4/9/2014 12:08:00 PM
Thanks Mandy :)
Date: 4/1/2014 2:05:00 AM
Wonderful take on the green theme, congrats on the fine win, madhavi
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Maddy Sp
Date: 4/9/2014 12:09:00 PM
Thanks Dr.Ram.
Date: 3/31/2014 9:39:00 PM
MADHAVI, AWESOME WIN..... CONGRATULATIONS..... LUV~ LINDA
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Date: 4/9/2014 12:09:00 PM
Thanks P.D. :)
Date: 3/22/2014 10:10:00 AM
Congratulations on the fine win for your latest poem, Madhavi
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Maddy Sp
Date: 3/23/2014 7:29:00 AM
Hi Dr.Ram, Thanks sir for appreciating my work.. ##mads
Date: 3/22/2014 7:29:00 AM
- Nice to read your "Latest Poem" in the contest sponsored by: Leonora Galinta :) - CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WIN, MADHAVI ! - Will also wish you an enjoyable weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/23/2014 7:31:00 AM
Thanks Anne, thanks baby..for appreciating my work..happy weekend to you too dear.. ©©mads
Date: 3/22/2014 7:17:00 AM
Congratulations on this great write and win my dear friend. I thoroughly enjoyed reading your precious gem. Thank u so much for sharing and your loving support in my contest. Big warm hugs! Love lots, Leonora
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Date: 3/23/2014 7:28:00 AM
Hi leonara, Its been my pleasure dear..I enjoyed participating in your contest.. Thanks a lot for appreciating my work and made me win in ur contest.. Hugs.. ##mads
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