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Regina's Autumn's Breath Contest ~ 8/19/26

Premiere Contest WinnerInhaling Autumn's Breath


Today, I felt the cooling breath of Autumn's morning mist
and my cheeks wore a blush of pink as if I had been kissed

The season is a time of bejeweled scenery across the lands
When Summer sleeps and Autumn lies in Nature's hands

Its gentle winds rustle through a grove of sugar maple trees
Perhaps it's sharing secrets it heard drifting across the seas

Autumn sings a lament as leaves tumble in shades of gold
With a palette of paints brushed on canvas, bright and bold

Its breath lingers across ripened orchards and wildflower fields
Where Summer's harvested crops have given up their yields

Fall carries along with it, the pungent aroma of spicey scent
cinnamon, cloves, and citrus of mulled wine, still in ferment

Autumn's enchantment holds me totally enrapt and spellbound
I hear flocks of migratory birds in flight and their anxious sounds

Over Fall's foggy moonlit field, comes the cry of a roosting loon
Cooing songs to his mate beneath the shine of a harvest moon

With every breath I inhale of Fall, I praise my Creator with elation
Blue skies or clouds of grey, I marvel at Autumn with admiration 

Softly, I whispered my name to the wind on this morning's walk
and heard it repeated in distant echoes as if Autumn could talk
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Johnson Avatar
September 29, 2026 at 5:19 PM
Oh, those wondorous words of Fall, Enough beauty to supply us all. Congrats for this beauty. Blessings.
Lane Avatar
September 30, 2026 at 6:22 AM
Many thanks for your kind congrats, Curtis.
Gibbons Avatar
September 15, 2026 at 2:55 PM
Congratulations genius Lin told u this waz a winner 🏆 woo hoo 🙌 Top prize fantastic proud of you ❤️‍🩹🌸🕊️🌇🫂 hugsss forever friend 🧡
Lane Avatar
September 16, 2026 at 6:23 AM
Yeah, ya did. Thanks for your insightful compliments, Dotti. 🌸
Ray Avatar
September 14, 2026 at 4:12 PM
limns filled with life's harvest, a dance of letting go in a seasonal transition, a bouquet of maturity....excellent execution....the quill has spoken well...
Lane Avatar
September 16, 2026 at 6:22 AM
I'm glad you enjoyed the read. Thank you.
Kitchin Avatar
September 11, 2026 at 10:18 AM
Lin, so beautifully penned. Love the autumn imagery too. Congratulations on your trophy win! 🌹
Lane Avatar
September 16, 2026 at 6:22 AM
Many thanks, Tania.
Young Avatar
September 9, 2026 at 10:30 AM
Lin, my favorite lines: "With every breath I inhale of Fall, I praise my Creator with elation Blue skies or clouds of grey, I marvel at Autumn with admiration Softly, I whispered my name to the wind on this morning's walk and heard it repeated in distant echoes as if Autumn could talk" Amen! As human beings, we should be inclined to appreciate the beauty that the world possesses. This truly resonated with me today. Congratulations on your win.
Lane Avatar
September 9, 2026 at 10:46 AM
Thank you, Simone. I appreciate your thoughtful comments. .
Daniel Avatar
September 7, 2026 at 10:07 PM
This is breathtaking, Lin, congratulations😄
Lane Avatar
September 8, 2026 at 9:16 AM
Thank you most sincerely, Joanna. ✨
Empress Avatar
September 6, 2026 at 1:50 AM
As if autumn could talk, that would be a perfect phrase as a prompt dear Linnersz! Autumn is my fave season for some reason! I find beauty in them! Altho September has never been my fave month! I love the way you’ve personified elements of nature! The flow and rhythm and the creative nature of your word weaving! I see why this received a trophy! 🏆 Congratulations!!! Well deserved 💃 Sending you light always
Lane Avatar
September 8, 2026 at 9:15 AM
Use it for an optional line in a contest. If Autumn could talk, what would its message be? Merci beaucoup for your thoughtful comments, as ever as well as your congrats! ❤️
Sharma  Avatar
September 6, 2026 at 12:56 AM
A FAVE ~ surely ⭐⭐💫💫
Lane Avatar
September 8, 2026 at 9:13 AM
😍 thanks!
Sharma  Avatar
September 6, 2026 at 12:53 AM
Wowzerrr Linzieee gawshhh u really melted my heart with this alchemy of autumn 🥮🍁🍂🧚🌙 all those shades feel heavenly, with the crispness of leaves, palettes of gold and rust, the harvest moon being blushed ... Isn't it the pure kiss of fall magic? Divine is how I would describe this poem... DIVINE... you really have immense versatility with rhymes, goodnesszz, the vividness of imagery and the lusciousness, my poetic soul is just being coalesced. I could smell and taste the cinnamon here! "With every breath I inhale of Fall, I praise my Creator with elation" Isn't that the most ethereal form of admiration? Heartiest congratulations on the majestic trophy win, which is so well deserved and heartwarming ~ keep shining and writinnnn, happy sundayyyyy😍😍 yeaaaayyyy huggssszzzz 🧚 🧚❤️‍🔥🫂
Lane Avatar
September 8, 2026 at 9:12 AM
Thank you, thank you, many times over for your time of reading and so categorically having enjoyed my lines, Hiya. Autumn... my favorite season for it does seem to wash away the old and begin to prepare us for the winter's chill before Spring renews us. Love and hugs to you!
Dietrich Avatar
September 5, 2026 at 10:10 AM
Gorgeous, Lin. Big congrats
Lane Avatar
September 5, 2026 at 10:17 AM
Thanks ever so much, Andrea. I hope you’re having a great birthday! 🌸
Smith  Avatar
September 5, 2026 at 6:16 AM
A lovely, warmly immersive rhyming-couplet poem that lets autumn unfold through mist, colour, fragrance, harvest, birdsong, and moonlight. The steady paired rhymes give it a gentle, traditional musicality, while the closing image of the speaker’s name returning on the wind beautifully personifies the season and leaves a quietly enchanted final note. Congratulations on podium place in the contest.
Lane Avatar
September 5, 2026 at 6:37 AM
Thank you for your recognition of these couplets. Alison.
Borg Avatar
September 5, 2026 at 6:01 AM
The last two lines are what dreams are made of, So descriptive, so captivating, so deserving of your Trophy Win. Congratulations Lin, I love your poetry and add this to my favourites.
Lane Avatar
September 5, 2026 at 6:35 AM
Pascal, thank you for your gracious remarks. They’re very much appreciated.
MITRA Avatar
September 5, 2026 at 2:43 AM
Revered Lady Lin, Thy triumph is richly merited; nay, methinks the crown hath found the altar for which it was long consecrated. “Autumn lies in Nature’s hands,” whilst leaves “tumble in shades of gold”—yet thy quill seems to draw the season’s very soul from some forgotten wellspring, buried beneath the hush of centuries. At whiles I am beguiled, scarce knowing whether thou art writing—or transmuting colour into breath, and breath into a canvas that floats before the inward eye. And that whispered name, returned by the wind like a secret the heavens themselves had memorised—exquisite thaumaturgy! 🙌 May the scorch of thy seasons be alchemised into gentler climes; and when such douceur doth find thee, may it descend like moonlight upon still waters, enfold thy days in its silken dominion, and forget the road by which it came. ✨🕊️
Lane Avatar
September 5, 2026 at 5:00 AM
Thank you for the kindness of your review of my couplets, Mohit. Autumn is my favorite season of the year, although here in the South, it lasts longer than in most other places.
Mcintosh Avatar
September 5, 2026 at 1:35 AM
Just love this so. Congrats on the top placement.
Lane Avatar
September 5, 2026 at 4:58 AM
Thank you for the honor of a placement in your contest, Gina. You theme was one of the type that I cannot refuse to write lines that express my love for the season.
Narain Avatar
August 19, 2026 at 11:16 AM
Beautiful poem. The Autumn will be here soon. Good luck in contest.
Lane Avatar
September 5, 2026 at 4:56 AM
Thanks, Jay.
Cunningham Avatar
August 18, 2026 at 10:33 AM
Our beautiful favourite season is coming Lin. I can't wait. You captured it well🍂🍁🍂🍁🍂🍁. Tom🌹
Lane Avatar
August 18, 2026 at 10:50 AM
Thanks a Lot, Tom. 90 at 7 am with the level of humidity here is a titch much to take a giid breath.
Andresen Avatar
August 18, 2026 at 9:58 AM
- You painted me into this beautiful poem, Lin :) - Autumn has already turned yellow and "summer" is over (we have had a cold and rainy summer) - Hope autumn will be as you describe :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
Lane Avatar
August 18, 2026 at 10:12 AM
Hi Anne-Lise and thank you for commenting on this one. Summer heat is still intense here. Nearing 100 degrees F every day for the last week. Autumn will be a welcome respite if it ever arrives.
Gibbons Avatar
August 18, 2026 at 9:45 AM
Well I'm applauding you here dear Lin 👏 outstanding every word paints the beautiful fall painting you shared. Took my breath away ~as I read and devoured every word n gazing at pic felt like I was walking with you. 😘 it's my fav season . All colours n smells divine. A great contender for win. Fav for me my inspiration American gal 😊 hugzzz 🫂🧡
Lane Avatar
August 18, 2026 at 9:58 AM
You join me and Tom Cunningham with admiring Autumn. I am so pleased that you read my lines so intently and if we were not half a world away from each other, we'd definitely be taking walks together, and probably getting into a wee bit of mischief, too!😊
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