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Influenza Stanza

A rippling of shivered skin
Convulsing tides of sweat
Induced spasms of chaotic
Visions of cataclysmic madness

Choking down pharmaceutical
Faith in medicinal fists, full
Of killers
Of pain

Where writhing in torsions of hotness
Lapse fleetingly into delicious
Snatches of delusional sleep and
Dream; among corpses of influenza victims

Laid bare by blinding
Headaches splitting
Muscle mucus into 
Coughing fits of 
Laughter why me

To peel apart the cocoon
Of a drug sloughed illness
Where the silhouette of humanity
Sings your recovery
Over a beaten body



28 August 2014

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 5/5/2015 7:19:00 PM
The side effects of the medication can be just as hard to cope with as the illness itself... Congrats on your win with this very expressive write. Great work, Mark!
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Mark Trichet
Date: 5/8/2015 5:13:00 PM
Hey thanx Kelly. I wrote this not long after recovering from the worst influenza I have ever had...
Date: 5/3/2015 10:33:00 PM
Mark, Congratulations on your win. Thanks for the support. SKAT
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Mark Trichet
Date: 5/4/2015 4:03:00 AM
Thanks SKAT A for placing me in your contest.
Date: 9/4/2014 9:26:00 AM
a really unique take. well done.
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Mark Trichet
Date: 9/4/2014 9:39:00 PM
Thanks Maurice for the visits, I appreciate it

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