Kim Rodrigues Poet Sedoka

Infinitude

what the ancient groom
kens with exclamatory
bliss: his prismatic diamond.

profusion of light,
tintinnabulation of
melodic soulmates ~ the bride.

4/9/2020
Title chosen: Infinitude
Sponsor: Edward Ibeh

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Edward Ibeh April 18, 2020 at 5:28 PM Congratulations on your wonderful win in my contest, Kim:-) I loved it! "Tintinnabulation"...there's a word I haven't heard in a long time! Kim Rodrigues April 18, 2020 at 6:37 PM Thank you, Edward.

Anne-Lise Andresen April 13, 2020 at 12:52 PM - Congratulations on a great winning poem in Edward Ibeh Sedoka contest, Kim :) - // Anne-Lise :) Kim Rodrigues April 13, 2020 at 1:11 PM Thank you, Anne-Lise! <3

Jenish Somadas April 13, 2020 at 12:41 AM tintinnabulation.. That is some word!!Great write.. Congrats Kim.. Kim Rodrigues April 13, 2020 at 7:53 AM Thank you, Jenish! :) Be blessed!

John Watt April 11, 2020 at 9:27 PM Wonderful imagery Kim! Love the wedding metaphor and the phrases prismatic diamond and melodic soulmates. Congrats, and a very happy Easter to you. Kim Rodrigues April 13, 2020 at 7:53 AM Thank you, John! Hope you had a nice Easter!

Demetrios Trifiatis April 10, 2020 at 7:20 AM Witty! A mach made in heaven my dearest, Kim! Hugs xxx Take care! Kim Rodrigues April 10, 2020 at 8:56 AM Yes, Jesus is the groom and we are the bride of Christ.

CayCay Godwin April 10, 2020 at 12:46 AM Is tentena*=+\%# really a word? This is an extremely clever write, Kim. Poetry hugs ... CayCay Kim Rodrigues April 10, 2020 at 8:53 AM Thank you, sweet friend! Yes, tintinnabulation means the ringing of bells.