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Infinitude

My love infinite, for a man gone up above- endless, boundless, eternal. I lay a red rose, still dew wet from the garden- lost in a sea of gray stones. _________________________ March 14, 2020 Poetry/Sedoka/Infinitude Copyright Protected, ID 20-1236-408-03 All Rights Reserved, 2020, Constance La France Written for the contest, Pick-A-Title Vol. 15, Sedoka sponsor, Edward Ibeh. Theme chosen #2 - Infinitude First Place

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Edward Ibeh

Date: 4/18/2020 4:49:00 PM

Heartiest congratulations on your first place win in my contest, Constance:-) Great poem!

Constance La France
Date: 4/19/2020 12:43:00 AM

Edward, thanks so much for the compliment and the congratulations, appreciate _Constance

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/13/2020 1:05:00 PM

- Congratulations on a great winning poem in Edward Ibeh Sedoka contest ... a beautiful top win, Constance :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Constance La France
Date: 4/13/2020 3:08:00 PM

Anne-Lise, thank you for the congratulations and the compliment _Constance

Jenish Somadas

Date: 4/13/2020 12:20:00 AM

Great write Constance.. Wonderful win.. Congrats..

Constance La France
Date: 4/13/2020 3:08:00 PM

Jenish, thanks for the compliment and the congrats _Constance

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/12/2020 7:19:00 AM

Congrats, Constance! A beautiful write!

Constance La France
Date: 4/12/2020 9:27:00 AM

Kim thanks for visiting with the congrats and the beautiful_Constance

Krish Radhakrishna

Date: 4/12/2020 2:19:00 AM

Congrats on your win, Constance. This is so well written. Creates a great image with a measure of sadness as your offering is lost in the myriad stones. So many infinites in one small poem! Very good!

Constance La France
Date: 4/12/2020 9:27:00 AM

Krish, thanks for the congrats and the compliment on my poem _Constance

Sandra Adams

Date: 4/11/2020 10:36:00 PM

powerful imagery in this beautiful write Constance... wonderful write... Congratulations on your win... Happy Easter! hugs

Constance La France
Date: 4/12/2020 9:28:00 AM

Sandra, thanks for visiting with the congratulations and the compliment on my poem, appreciate _Constance

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/16/2020 9:51:00 AM

Wow!

Constance La France
Date: 3/17/2020 12:37:00 PM

Richard, thanks so much for the compliment _Constance

Paul Callus

Date: 3/16/2020 9:39:00 AM

Beautiful, touching lines, ending with strong imagery, Constance. I often pay visits to our local cemetery which is not far from where I live. ~ Regards // paul

Constance La France
Date: 3/17/2020 12:37:00 PM

Paul, thanks for the beautiful, I love the tranquility and peace of a cemetery _Constance

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/14/2020 8:36:00 PM

Your delicate imagery brings emotion out in full force my friend.

Constance La France
Date: 3/15/2020 2:13:00 PM

Caren, thanks for the compliment _Constance