Constance La France Poet Sedoka

Infinitude

 
My love infinite,
for a man gone up above-
endless, boundless, eternal.
I lay a red rose, 
still dew wet from the garden-
lost in a sea of gray stones.

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March 14, 2020


Poetry/Sedoka/Infinitude
Copyright Protected, ID 20-1236-408-03
All Rights Reserved, 2020, Constance La France


Written for the contest, Pick-A-Title Vol. 15, Sedoka
sponsor, Edward Ibeh. Theme chosen #2 - Infinitude

First Place

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Edward Ibeh April 18, 2020 at 4:49 PM Heartiest congratulations on your first place win in my contest, Constance:-) Great poem! Constance La France April 19, 2020 at 12:43 AM Edward, thanks so much for the compliment and the congratulations, appreciate _Constance

Anne-Lise Andresen April 13, 2020 at 1:05 PM - Congratulations on a great winning poem in Edward Ibeh Sedoka contest ... a beautiful top win, Constance :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Constance La France April 13, 2020 at 3:08 PM Anne-Lise, thank you for the congratulations and the compliment _Constance

Jenish Somadas April 13, 2020 at 12:20 AM Great write Constance.. Wonderful win.. Congrats.. Constance La France April 13, 2020 at 3:08 PM Jenish, thanks for the compliment and the congrats _Constance

Kim Rodrigues April 12, 2020 at 7:19 AM Congrats, Constance! A beautiful write! Constance La France April 12, 2020 at 9:27 AM Kim thanks for visiting with the congrats and the beautiful_Constance

Krish Radhakrishna April 12, 2020 at 2:19 AM Congrats on your win, Constance. This is so well written. Creates a great image with a measure of sadness as your offering is lost in the myriad stones. So many infinites in one small poem! Very good! Constance La France April 12, 2020 at 9:27 AM Krish, thanks for the congrats and the compliment on my poem _Constance

Sandra Adams April 11, 2020 at 10:36 PM powerful imagery in this beautiful write Constance... wonderful write... Congratulations on your win... Happy Easter! hugs Constance La France April 12, 2020 at 9:28 AM Sandra, thanks for visiting with the congratulations and the compliment on my poem, appreciate _Constance

Richard Lamoureux March 16, 2020 at 9:51 AM Wow! Constance La France March 17, 2020 at 12:37 PM Richard, thanks so much for the compliment _Constance

Paul Callus March 16, 2020 at 9:39 AM Beautiful, touching lines, ending with strong imagery, Constance. I often pay visits to our local cemetery which is not far from where I live. ~ Regards // paul Constance La France March 17, 2020 at 12:37 PM Paul, thanks for the beautiful, I love the tranquility and peace of a cemetery _Constance

Caren Krutsinger March 14, 2020 at 8:36 PM Your delicate imagery brings emotion out in full force my friend. Constance La France March 15, 2020 at 2:13 PM Caren, thanks for the compliment _Constance