Infinite Fervour

Infinite fervour

The pre dawn silence
of two ancient lovers
wrapped around a glass of wine
as they reminisce their epic romance
stargazing in the daylight.
speaking volumes with their eyes.
Her skin begs , his mind flickers
He knows her well.
She reads his mind.
He traces her lips
She gently beckons to him.
And their stargazing is interrupted!

Copyright @2017 by Redfiery
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Swartz Avatar
October 31, 2017 at 12:13 AM
Liquor and love and oh what a night. I really enjoy this poem.
K  Avatar
October 22, 2017 at 10:43 PM
I love this. To me, it is written as if the subjects are in some kind of loving delirium together, drunk on each other. Thank you for sharing.
Goff Avatar
April 22, 2017 at 9:16 AM
Gentle, loving flow...sweet poem, Red
James Avatar
February 26, 2017 at 9:55 AM
Wine glasses now empty?...welcome back..great write.
Lamoureux Avatar
February 20, 2017 at 8:36 AM
Love it Red.. you once again bring the fire an warm us with your heat.
Warrior Avatar
February 17, 2017 at 9:35 AM
You've been gone too long my friend...welcome back Red...sit down and have some soup lol...god bless...^WW^
Fiery Avatar
February 17, 2017 at 9:51 AM
Soup is good but beer would be much better . What do you say? Rum is the best ...how are you ? I was lost somewhere ...
Smith Avatar
February 17, 2017 at 1:31 AM
You haven't missed a beat Dear Red, as passionate as ever,welcome back,you've been missed...
Callus Avatar
February 14, 2017 at 10:56 AM
Hmm...I must be a mind reader, too:) Something prompted me to come visit your posts, hoping to find a new poem, and I'm not disappointed. Pleased to be reading this lovely poem again, Red. (Keep faith in your abilities...) Hugs // paul
Lamoureux Avatar
February 13, 2017 at 8:17 AM
You haven't lost your passionate touch! Welcome back!
Godwin Avatar
February 12, 2017 at 10:51 AM
It can and does happen! I enjoyed this and all its implications ... CayCay
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