Infinite Fervour

Infinite fervour

The pre dawn silence
of two ancient lovers
wrapped around a glass of wine
as they reminisce their epic romance
stargazing in the daylight.
speaking volumes with their eyes.
Her skin begs , his mind flickers
He knows her well.
She reads his mind.
He traces her lips
She gently beckons to him.
And their stargazing is interrupted!

Copyright @2017 by Redfiery

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 10/31/2017 12:13:00 AM
Liquor and love and oh what a night. I really enjoy this poem.
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Date: 10/22/2017 10:43:00 PM
I love this. To me, it is written as if the subjects are in some kind of loving delirium together, drunk on each other. Thank you for sharing.
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Date: 4/22/2017 9:16:00 AM
Gentle, loving flow...sweet poem, Red
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Date: 2/26/2017 9:55:00 AM
Wine glasses now empty?...welcome back..great write.
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Date: 2/20/2017 8:36:00 AM
Love it Red.. you once again bring the fire an warm us with your heat.
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Date: 2/17/2017 9:35:00 AM
You've been gone too long my friend...welcome back Red...sit down and have some soup lol...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 2/17/2017 9:51:00 AM
Soup is good but beer would be much better . What do you say? Rum is the best ...how are you ? I was lost somewhere ...
Date: 2/17/2017 1:31:00 AM
You haven't missed a beat Dear Red, as passionate as ever,welcome back,you've been missed...
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Date: 2/14/2017 10:56:00 AM
Hmm...I must be a mind reader, too:) Something prompted me to come visit your posts, hoping to find a new poem, and I'm not disappointed. Pleased to be reading this lovely poem again, Red. (Keep faith in your abilities...) Hugs // paul
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Date: 2/13/2017 8:17:00 AM
You haven't lost your passionate touch! Welcome back!
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Date: 2/12/2017 10:51:00 AM
It can and does happen! I enjoyed this and all its implications ... CayCay
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