Inferiority

INFERIORITY


In my early thirty 
I have to marry 
A girl much better than me 
As an angel dropped to me.

People started behaving nicer 
And more smoother 
To my astonishment
They being to refuse my wallet 

It hurts badly
When your love laughs
With someone smoother
Making me feeling inferior

The wall of doubt 
kept increasing on and on
As she started to hide 
her tours to outside


I intended to talk 
but to was damn difficult
At least not in an easy walk
With a mind full of doubt

Inferiority struck again 
And came again and again 
It make me think apart 
And I decided to depart

I was not for her 
And it blinked as an error
Again, as I am inferior 
And she is a fuller.

I did talked 
But not in my humor 
Rum helped me as ever 
And there came a thought exploder

Her tears rolled off
As the truth came out
And also the fact 
That I had no tact

I went clueless
I was more of a dubious 
But recognized it instantly
And apologized for my mentality 

I felt as low as hell
As I did nothing to tell
What I did was to doubt
And that too, on my spouse!!

A word called “misunderstanding”
Has started building 
But was quite easy to break 
As a b’day cake

I felt lighter 
As “miss” was replaced by “better”
Now it is all clear 
And we lived happily ever.



                                                                                                                                      
-viv1
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
May 3, 2010 at 10:13 AM
From the poetry I have been reading today I can see the weekend handed out a lot of inspiration. I enjoyed reading your poetry today and wish you continued inspiration thank you for sharing Vivek. Love, Carol
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May 2, 2010 at 6:17 AM
Interesting thoughts that we have penned in this one...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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