Infatuation

I

School bag, blue shirt, hair parted on the right,
Dal-rice, clock ticking away in delight;
Cycles stop, wagons with seasonal crop, 
Get to her class before the gates shut tight.

II

The obsession froths beyond the eavesdrop,
Secrecy brews a moral of Aesop;
Friends don't yet know, the fear that the eyes show,
Grows the need to shout it from the rooftop.

III

Geography is boring, the maps tow
Useless details such as where's Kosovo;
It's all pretense, the absorption intense,
But her attention sets the world aglow.

IV

The wistful heart struggles to make some sense
And accept pain at misery's expense;
Then her comment, and the motives ferment,
The surging tide sweeps over the heart's fence.

V

Evening is drunk with sunlight, the day's spent,
Menthol erases the cigarette scent;
She fades from sight, the mundanities write,
A long ride back under the clouds' intent.



-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Date: 24 / 10 / 2016
One of the reasons I used present tense is, for me this is a memory trapped in time, like a photograph. A day in life from simpler time.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Salehi Avatar
May 26, 2017 at 12:42 PM
Hello Tamal, these series of rubayiat are basically correct with one exception that a Rubayi should be spiritual rather than secular and worldly... Pashang
Allison Avatar
November 28, 2016 at 3:30 PM
Many congrats on your win Tamal:-)I have never tried this form you penned such vivid memories thanks for sharing:-) hugs jan xx
Kundu Avatar
November 28, 2016 at 6:06 PM
Thanks, Jan!
Negron Flores Avatar
November 28, 2016 at 9:12 AM
Congratulations Tamal on the placement of the contest.
Kundu Avatar
November 28, 2016 at 9:59 AM
Thank you, Nayda! And thank you once more for the contest!!
White Avatar
November 27, 2016 at 2:51 AM
I love Rubai. I have been translating a fair few. This series is lovely. I can see them happening :)
White Avatar
November 28, 2016 at 11:41 AM
Wow! Coming back with congratulations for you. So happy that this wonderful poem won a placement!
Kundu Avatar
November 27, 2016 at 6:26 AM
Yeah? That's pretty cool! And thank you. The memories of adolescence tend to quite surreal.
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