Infatuated

powerful monoku ~

Awe struck, I guess if a Sanguine is silent. LOL..Enjoyed reading this one. Sara K

Congratulations on your first place win!

Love the "...sanguine silence..." Congratulations! :)

- A great one, Ink :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest - hugs

a very creative monoku, with nice alliteration - congrats on your 1st place in the contest :)

Lucky YOU. Congrats

tugs at the heart ~ warmest congratulations on your win, IE, a beautiful composition, enjoyed

Congratulations on your top win, Dear Ink. Your one line says so much! Brilliant!

Infatuation sounds dangerous.. Congratulations on your win in the contest.

Very lovely...in few words, too.:)

Beautifully composed! I enjoyed reading this jewel of a poem.

Such is the calling of love Ink Empress! Your Monoku dazzles!! Happy Thursday xxoo

Sirens says so much. There existance has a clutch. haha

I still pirouette to his magnetic sirens, in sanguine silence. Awwwwwwwwn is this abt me papi)??? I feel the same tooo!!! <3 absolutely swoooned by u ayeee

Story of my life. lol (apparently). Cute and to the point.. I think it is magnificent to be able to do powerful short poetry that still speaks to, and of, a burdened soul. Hit the mark here :)

Infatuation will do that--awesome description in ornate words, as always, Ink.

Wow, this verse is the pinnacle of creativity; it just has one line! Ink, I am very moved by your words and delighted by your insightfulness. The few syllables of this Monoku express a wealth of feeling. Those feelings of enchantment and attraction to another person are perfectly conveyed here. One phrase that stands out to me is "In sanguine silence," which creates a mood that is persuasive and enthusiastic. Much appreciate your wonderful and uplifting comment on my page. BOL with the contest

wow this is the line of all lines Ink Empress, I love it, and I thank you for your beautiful empathetic heart, your one in a million, take care, :) Vie

Great monoku, Ink. I th-Ink S1's going to like this as much as I do! BOL in the contest! Hugs

Woah, the feeling of infatuation and attraction has been so impeccably described here! I am blown away by the vividness that you can convey within just a monoku of 17 syllables that represents itself as a magnificent and magical poetic dream.. "Magnetic sirens" Ahh, what a brilliant word-combination there.. "In sanguine silence" Wow, I absolutely love this so much! When one keeps thinking about them like the whilst oscillating in the incessant moonlit waves, their essence caresses our existence

How well expressed Monoku. Excellent. Blessings.

Very good vocabulary… and beautiful poem .