Infatuated

I still pirouette to his magnetic sirens, in sanguine silence.

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/22/2024 10:27:00 AM

Awe struck, I guess if a Sanguine is silent. LOL..Enjoyed reading this one. Sara K

Karen Jones

Date: 10/18/2023 7:59:00 AM

Congratulations on your first place win!

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 10/17/2023 7:39:00 AM

Love the "...sanguine silence..." Congratulations! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/17/2023 1:46:00 AM

- A great one, Ink :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest - hugs

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 10/16/2023 1:35:00 PM

a very creative monoku, with nice alliteration - congrats on your 1st place in the contest :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/16/2023 10:59:00 AM

Lucky YOU. Congrats

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 10/15/2023 8:29:00 PM

tugs at the heart ~ warmest congratulations on your win, IE, a beautiful composition, enjoyed

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 10/15/2023 11:01:00 AM

Congratulations on your top win, Dear Ink. Your one line says so much! Brilliant!

Silent One

Date: 10/15/2023 8:13:00 AM

Infatuation sounds dangerous.. Congratulations on your win in the contest.

Ink Empress
Date: 10/15/2023 10:31:00 AM

Awwn thank u it truly is an honor to be placed in your contest. Some dangerous thoughts i have sometimes haha

Paige Hind

Date: 10/12/2023 1:25:00 PM

Very lovely...in few words, too.:)

Ink Empress
Date: 10/13/2023 4:20:00 AM

Awwn u are so sweet

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 10/12/2023 12:54:00 PM

Beautifully composed! I enjoyed reading this jewel of a poem.

Ink Empress
Date: 10/13/2023 4:19:00 AM

Means so much thank u so much

Mike Gentile

Date: 10/12/2023 12:35:00 PM

Such is the calling of love Ink Empress! Your Monoku dazzles!! Happy Thursday xxoo

Ink Empress
Date: 10/13/2023 4:14:00 AM

Thank you so much mike, appreciate your support

The Situation

Date: 10/12/2023 12:03:00 PM

Sirens says so much. There existance has a clutch. haha

Ink Empress
Date: 10/13/2023 4:14:00 AM

? Im confused!

Lioness Onpaper

Date: 10/12/2023 9:36:00 AM

I still pirouette to his magnetic sirens, in sanguine silence. Awwwwwwwwn is this abt me papi)??? I feel the same tooo!!! <3 absolutely swoooned by u ayeee

Ink Empress
Date: 10/13/2023 4:12:00 AM

Awwwn papi u funny thank u

Tom Woody

Date: 10/12/2023 8:25:00 AM

Exquisite. Now we need to know: Who is the mystery person? Very nice onesie

Ink Empress
Date: 10/13/2023 4:12:00 AM

Thank you so much. Hah. Yes he is a puppeteer

Sam Scott

Date: 10/12/2023 8:02:00 AM

Story of my life. lol (apparently). Cute and to the point.. I think it is magnificent to be able to do powerful short poetry that still speaks to, and of, a burdened soul. Hit the mark here :)

Ink Empress
Date: 10/13/2023 4:06:00 AM

Oh thank you so much. Sometimes when infatuated u feel like a hypnotized marionette, that was my point here actually. Some might be able to comprehend. U surely did dig it

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/12/2023 6:16:00 AM

Infatuation will do that--awesome description in ornate words, as always, Ink.

Ink Empress
Date: 10/13/2023 4:04:00 AM

Haha yes vijay: thank you for your kind support

Sotto Poet

Date: 10/12/2023 5:32:00 AM

Wow, this verse is the pinnacle of creativity; it just has one line! Ink, I am very moved by your words and delighted by your insightfulness. The few syllables of this Monoku express a wealth of feeling. Those feelings of enchantment and attraction to another person are perfectly conveyed here. One phrase that stands out to me is "In sanguine silence," which creates a mood that is persuasive and enthusiastic. Much appreciate your wonderful and uplifting comment on my page. BOL with the contest

Ink Empress
Date: 10/13/2023 4:00:00 AM

Thank you so very much sotto for such a profound comment on my monoku. Very grateful for your support

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 10/12/2023 4:20:00 AM

wow this is the line of all lines Ink Empress, I love it, and I thank you for your beautiful empathetic heart, your one in a million, take care, :) Vie

Ink Empress
Date: 10/13/2023 3:56:00 AM

Awwn sweet rose u deserve all the love and kindness

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 10/12/2023 4:06:00 AM

a stunning Haiku, Ink. 'Pirouette to his magnetic sirens' is perfect. Your Monokus say so much. Yours left me breathless....enjoy your Thursday, Sara

Ink Empress
Date: 10/13/2023 3:53:00 AM

Thank you sara for your kind feedback

Charles Messina

Date: 10/12/2023 3:44:00 AM

Great monoku, Ink. I th-Ink S1's going to like this as much as I do! BOL in the contest! Hugs

Ink Empress
Date: 10/13/2023 3:47:00 AM

Haha good wordplay! I dunno about that, lets hope for the best hah. Thank u so much for your support

Hiya Sharma

Date: 10/12/2023 3:20:00 AM

Woah, the feeling of infatuation and attraction has been so impeccably described here! I am blown away by the vividness that you can convey within just a monoku of 17 syllables that represents itself as a magnificent and magical poetic dream.. "Magnetic sirens" Ahh, what a brilliant word-combination there.. "In sanguine silence" Wow, I absolutely love this so much! When one keeps thinking about them like the whilst oscillating in the incessant moonlit waves, their essence caresses our existence

Ink Empress
Date: 10/13/2023 3:46:00 AM

Awwn thank you angelic star! Appreciate your support

Hiya Sharma
Date: 10/12/2023 3:20:00 AM

Best of luck to you for the contest, this is such a profound take, really breathtaking! Sending you so much love dear Ink :)