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Infant Daybreak

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Ambling in the charm of Tidal Basin We hold hands with a lilac morning Long before it pleads with the sunrise To sparkle the view of a purple dawn Saddled in the daze of hazy fog. Strolling under gleam of a starry night Along the trails of romantic banks We handed the new-day to misty sight Coating the blooms in lavender hues Seducing the motifs love subscribes. Dawning deterred by thick overcast Defiantly rises on the golden skyline Unwrapping monument's foggy attire Shimmering beneath the lowly tides. In awe of its luster we lose ourselves Hanging on the vertex of rising flame As a passionate kiss of avid romance Attunes two hearts to infant-daybreak And the horizon blushes end to end. September 17, 2018 Poem of the day on September 19, 2018 Placed first in Late September Standard Contest by Brian Strand NOTE: Sunrise at the Tidal Basin in Washington D.C. The photo shows cherry blossoms with a purple tinge and the partially covered monument in early morning fog.

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Angela Crabtree

Date: 12/18/2020 4:30:00 PM

Romantic bliss... This is beautiful, Vijay :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/6/2018 6:40:00 PM

Today I have seen four different poems I really liked in the past and which now have gotten POTD's. This is one of them and it was so well deserved . Congrats, Vijay

Vladislav Raven

Date: 10/11/2018 7:11:00 AM

Hi Vijay, such elegant words you lay before us. This is a beauty, the imagery your words portray dancies so easily into the mind. This is such a wonderful write my friend. Belated congratulations for your win Vijay, much deserved with this jeweled delight. I could read this one over and over. The whole piece touches me deep. This one floats so gently into my faves Vijay. Have a wonderful Thursday. Your friend always....Mike.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/12/2018 10:56:00 AM

You bring me smiles with your generous comments Mike..many thanks for your visit and wonderful feedback.

Heidi Sands

Date: 10/8/2018 5:27:00 PM

Congratulations for this poem making the best new poems list :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/8/2018 5:57:00 PM

Thank you Heidi.

Robertina B.

Date: 10/8/2018 11:51:00 AM

Vijay, a belated congratulations on you POTD.. I am in complete awe, with your masterpiece.. Excellent imagery!! I was so absorbed in your beautiful words.. Your talent shines like a glowing rare gem.. A breathtaking photo, my friend.. Many blessings!!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/8/2018 5:58:00 PM

Thank you Robertina..appreciate the kind feedback.

Vegter Papyrus

Date: 9/26/2018 9:48:00 AM

This is the way time seems to stand still. Beautiful work!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/26/2018 11:19:00 AM

Thank you Vegter.

Line Gauthier

Date: 9/24/2018 12:07:00 AM

Lovely, Vijay. Congrats on your top win.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/26/2018 11:19:00 AM

Thank you Line.

Pashang Salehi

Date: 9/22/2018 9:16:00 PM

Excellent. Well penned. Thanks for sharing it.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/26/2018 11:19:00 AM

Thank you Pashang.

Chuck Melugin

Date: 9/21/2018 8:05:00 AM

Poetic passion pours....paints perfect picture! Daybreak dances! VJ, take a bow!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/21/2018 3:16:00 PM

Thank you Chuck..appreciate your visit and comments.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 9/20/2018 5:18:00 PM

Beautifully imaged piece of poetry; you've depicted the photograph quite well in this poem. Thoroughly pleasant and relaxing to read. Thanks for the great moment.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/21/2018 6:51:00 AM

Appreciate your feedback..many many thanks, M.L.K.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 9/20/2018 1:55:00 PM

You've painted a vividly lovely scene, Vijay! Janice

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/21/2018 6:50:00 AM

Thank you Janice.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 9/20/2018 6:30:00 AM

Your poetry shines dear friend. I tell you one thing, you never lack lustre. Have a great day.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/20/2018 8:18:00 AM

Thank you again, Pixie.

Maria Williams

Date: 9/20/2018 2:29:00 AM

Sorry I'm a bit late Vijay, but congratulations on this excellent poem of yours being awarded POTD.....Maria hugs

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/20/2018 8:16:00 AM

Delighted by your visit and comments Maria..many many thanks.

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 9/20/2018 1:28:00 AM

I'm so glad that you have been honoured the POTD.. Congratulations dear Vijay! A well deserved acknowledgement for your amazing and unique poetry! My deepest regards. Keep ascending to the highest levels of Beauty. Stay blessed always.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/20/2018 8:15:00 AM

My regards to you as well, Besma. You write with kindness..your comments are so well appreciated.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/19/2018 5:08:00 PM

This poem is so enchanting Vijay....with lines like "In awe of its luster we lose ourselves Hanging on the vertex of rising flame" I see why this beauty was honored with POTD Vijay. It is one of your best! Congratulations my friend on your deserving recognition! : )

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/20/2018 8:13:00 AM

A joy to read your cheerful comments..many many thanks, Connie.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/19/2018 3:30:00 PM

and a round of cheers for a fine POTD award, vijay..huggs

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/20/2018 8:12:00 AM

Thank you once again, nette.

Sandra Haight

Date: 9/19/2018 2:57:00 PM

Such lovely imagery in your well-written poem, Vijay. We have been there a few times, but never during the beautiful dawn as you describe. Congratulations on your well-deserved POTD honor! Sandra

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/20/2018 8:11:00 AM

Appreciate the kind words..many many thanks Sandra for your visit and comments.