Inevitable

Tragic death is loves inevitable equal. Lay

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Ramanan Duraiswami

Date: 5/8/2023 7:24:00 PM

Excellent compositions, each one full of pain and pathos. Skillfully woven narratives! I loved all of them. Best of luck!????????????????????

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/21/2012 10:17:00 PM

LAY,, Stopping by to greet you and every other soup poet, with a special thank you comment, during this wonderful Thanksgiving season. Hope you do not mind the time I am taking to express my sincere appreciation for any support you have offered during the years, or time you have been here on the soup. I am deeply thankful and extend to you my best wishes for a happy and healthy Poetic Magical Thanksgiving Day. *Always & Forever, the Poet Destroyer; -*

Joe Maverick

Date: 10/18/2012 12:21:00 PM

Hey this is a deep enough piece here lay.. How are you and the girls keeping..? Yours Joe.)

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/16/2012 3:30:00 AM

wow Lay, this is something else, so much sincerity here in just 6 words, this poem shouts out to one, when reading....

L.Ruby Meyer

Date: 9/7/2012 12:37:00 AM

Lay, one line takes my breath away in depth of thought and feeling. x peace Ruby

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/6/2012 6:19:00 AM

Hoping you continue to find the inspiration to write and share your wonderful poetry with us Lay. I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning while I am having a cup of coffee and starting my day with a smile. Love, Carol

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/5/2012 11:54:00 AM

So true Walayee. - well written. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)