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Inescapable

I would away fly, but why dream All I would leave I keep to scream The world is only me And only I through the world stream The farthest star is my extreme Even more I'm lonely It was so for God, then he spoke Sundered now in three: no revoke Adam imaged that pain Could not utter what did provoke The inner urge that longings stoke Yet woke without complain I too a longing bear in me Something deep, fast like gravity My weighted whole desires Self trapped in its own sweet beauty Through love to find infinity When self from want retires by David Smalling for RUMI IN RIME COUEE "Do not feel lonely the universe is inside of you"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/11/2012 3:07:00 PM
wonderful winner David, well done. awesome poem. harry
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Date: 5/11/2012 1:02:00 PM
Getting old is not for the faint of heart 'too soon old too late wise!' Congrad's on Your win Light & Love
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Date: 5/10/2012 7:02:00 PM
This is an amazing write David!Congrats on your 1st place win.
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Date: 5/10/2012 2:13:00 PM
Interesting work..Enjoyed...Congrats...Sara
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Date: 5/10/2012 12:34:00 PM
Cingratulations on your win.
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Date: 5/10/2012 10:48:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Nette's "Rumi In Rime Couee" contest David. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/10/2012 9:02:00 AM
Congratulations on this amazing win, David! I love especially that last stanza...."my weighted whoe desires".... so perfect!
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Date: 5/10/2012 8:08:00 AM
Nicely done David! Love the flow, the rhyme and the message. Joe
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Date: 5/10/2012 7:43:00 AM
A very powerful poem. Congrats on the 1st place. Enjoyed the read, David. :)
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Date: 5/10/2012 7:23:00 AM
David congrats on your win..David
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Date: 5/10/2012 6:53:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning piece David xx
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Date: 5/10/2012 1:50:00 AM
spellbinding, david... congrats on your top win in my contest!..:) huggs!
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David Smalling
Date: 5/10/2012 6:29:00 AM
Thanks Nette, it was a great challenge to widen my repertoire. I was charmed
Date: 4/25/2012 10:59:00 AM
Another good one.. Well done..JP]
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