Janice Canerdy Poet Sedoka

Inertia

He sits there stone-still,
eyes closed. "The world's still turning,
Husband! When will you arise?"

What is this state called?
He says it’s meditation,
but I think it’s inertia.


Dete Written: April 9, 2020
Contest: Pick a Title-Sedoka--Inertia     placed 4th
Sponsor: Edward Ibeh

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Kai Michael Neumann May 6, 2020 at 2:59 AM Very nice ... Janice Canerdy May 6, 2020 at 8:32 AM Thanks

Edward Ibeh April 18, 2020 at 5:37 PM Lovely, humorous sedoka, Janice:-) Congratulations on your win in my contest! Janice Canerdy April 18, 2020 at 6:30 PM Edward, thank you for sponsoring and for my placemment. Janice

Anne-Lise Andresen April 13, 2020 at 12:49 PM - Congratulations on a great winning place in Edward Ibeh Sedoka contest :) - // Anne-Lise :) Janice Canerdy April 13, 2020 at 1:07 PM Thanks so much, Anne-Lise. Janice

Jenish Somadas April 9, 2020 at 11:44 PM Lol.. funny sedoka.. You did really well with the theme.. Good luck Janice.. Janice Canerdy April 13, 2020 at 1:07 PM Thanks so much, Jenish! Janice