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Inertia

He sits there stone-still, eyes closed. "The world's still turning, Husband! When will you arise?" What is this state called? He says it’s meditation, but I think it’s inertia.
Dete Written: April 9, 2020 Contest: Pick a Title-Sedoka--Inertia placed 4th Sponsor: Edward Ibeh

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Date: 5/6/2020 2:59:00 AM
Very nice ...
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 5/6/2020 8:32:00 AM
Thanks
Date: 4/18/2020 5:37:00 PM
Lovely, humorous sedoka, Janice:-) Congratulations on your win in my contest!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 4/18/2020 6:30:00 PM
Edward, thank you for sponsoring and for my placemment. Janice
Date: 4/13/2020 12:49:00 PM
- Congratulations on a great winning place in Edward Ibeh Sedoka contest :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 4/13/2020 1:07:00 PM
Thanks so much, Anne-Lise. Janice
Date: 4/9/2020 11:44:00 PM
Lol.. funny sedoka.. You did really well with the theme.. Good luck Janice..
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 4/13/2020 1:07:00 PM
Thanks so much, Jenish! Janice

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