Indwelling Sun

Time out! In a match – a rest and not
the finale. Out of Time! In life, perhaps
the beginning of a fresh rally.  I choose
to trust, such score keeping, whether
pause or done~ to the resilient earth,
countless stars -- our own indwelling Sun.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Maverick Avatar
April 12, 2025 at 12:57 PM
A hot hit, come to mention it.? Shining topic Luminent all round, Are you sure you'll be able To keep that energy down? Still you do have Visitors?? Keep shinng that light by sight by sound.'
DiMino Avatar
April 12, 2025 at 2:18 PM
Thank you, Joe; divine light is powerful, bright beyond description. When Christ's blood, dripped to the earth, released was such a penetration of Divine Light...that daylight appeared as darkness. Some years ago, I had the experience of Divine Light entered me at the top of my head, radiated down though all of my psychic centers to the very tips of my toes -- my only thought was, how can anything be so Almighty and not disintegrate me in an instant? How could I yet be alive? I've never forgotten.
Rose  Avatar
April 11, 2025 at 6:34 PM
our own indwelling Sun. So nice to share that beautiful sun with you everyday Joe :)
DiMino Avatar
April 11, 2025 at 7:02 PM
Hi Vie; thank you. Goes well with your latest poem. Have a wonderful weekend.
Empress Avatar
April 11, 2025 at 1:53 PM
Dear Joe; I love the metaphorical manner youv delivered your thoughts here; and theres so much wisdom, resilience; strength and trust in so much of life which is so needed , i love especially how youv written " In life, perhaps the beginning of a fresh rally. I choose to trust, such score keeping, Whether pause or done~ " how deeply meaningful! Pleasure reading you today! Sending you light always!
DiMino Avatar
April 11, 2025 at 4:27 PM
Thank you, IE; who knows? As you do, I write what I feel, and hope it connects. Blessings my friend. Have a great weekend!
Rodrigues Avatar
April 11, 2025 at 11:20 AM
to the resilient earth, countless stars -- our own indwelling Sun. And God’s majesty! We are on a globe out in space - what wonder…what magic!
DiMino Avatar
April 11, 2025 at 4:29 PM
Yes, indeed! God's majesty. How can one look out, and then not marvel at all there is -- thinking, this could not be by chance. Too beautiful in incalculable ways. Thank you, Kim.
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