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Indivisible

For years I’ve passed a sculpture When I walk at break of day. It’s very unobtrusive, Likely meant to be that way. It’s just one word carved out of wood And tethered to a sign Reminding people not to park Or they’ll incur a fine. The word is “indivisible” And in the USA, It’s front and center in the pledge That schoolkids learn to say. We’re meant to think our country Is united and, with pride, We pledge allegiance to the nation Where we all reside. But lately, we’re divided Like an apple cut in two, Each half belonging to a crowd That’s cloaked in red or blue. This week I found the sculpture gone And I was not surprised; Perhaps the artist figured out His hope’s been compromised.

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Date: 3/24/2024 6:00:00 PM
United we stand, divided we fall. We pledge allegiance to the flag of the United States of America. But, it truly seems the allegiance is no longer united. This nation has seen unrest throughout it's history. I hope WE can come together in consensual manner to move forward with humanity.
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Date: 2/25/2024 2:49:00 PM
"invisible", What a concept. A very evocative piece, Ilene.
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Date: 2/21/2024 7:18:00 PM
A nice poem with entertaining rhyme. Way to go.
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Date: 2/21/2024 5:15:00 PM
A marvelous poem Ilene. Common sense seems to somehow left the building. 'one Nation under God, indivisible, with liberty and justice for all. I love the line, like an apple cut into' except both sides are rotten. Have wonderful day, my friend.
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