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Indiscernible Void

Indiscernible Void

Fear all but quivers in the vastness of a void
With no borders to rest one’s eyes upon
The equilibrium spins with no direction to run
The expanse of the nothingness to large to avoid

Composure all but ceases as uncertainty invades
Questions left floating in indiscernible space
Existing becoming a name without a face
Drawn breath inaccessible as a life force decays

Written 09/29/2019  


“Indiscernible Void”
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Date: 9/30/2019 7:44:00 AM
A witty write. Enjoyed reading it :)
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Debra Squyres
Date: 9/30/2019 10:29:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 9/30/2019 1:46:00 AM
Indiscernable but of a noticeable presence for a poetess to feel and render into a clever and beautiful poetry! A great pleasure to read you Debra.. Regards and blessings.
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Debra Squyres
Date: 9/30/2019 10:29:00 AM
Thank you... I appreciate you reading my poem.
Date: 9/29/2019 11:17:00 PM
This is a nice poem. Best wishes for the contest and many blessings
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Debra Squyres
Date: 9/30/2019 10:28:00 AM
Thank you.. many blessings to you as well

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