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Indifference

When love grows cold Puzzled and confused we grieve Like a malignancy spreads Deadly deception Manifests astounds derails Emotions self-pride riot Rushing into defense mode Like chemo exhausts Worn drained the storm clouds gather Advice abundant Blind dates rejected Remission slowly ensues Indifference born

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Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 1/20/2010 9:23:00 AM

Indifference is a defense mode. Sometimes what's in the eyes is not in the heart. I liked this. Vince

Kim Hilliker

Date: 1/2/2010 8:25:00 AM

So true. A great write! I love the last line. Happy New Year!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/14/2009 7:13:00 PM

My new fav tonight.. u have written a mouthful here Audrey.. and spoken for many who have been through this "ordeal" known as love... or as I like to say "luv"... can so relate... wonderful write... blessings.. luv... and thankxxx for your comments of encouragement on my poetry tonight... inspiring as always... blessings... luv.. Linda-Marie...

John Loving Iii

Date: 12/6/2009 4:13:00 PM

i heard it said the oppisite of love is not hate but Indirfference. this poem reflects some of the thing's that may have gone wrong with out me knowing about it. the line "rushing in to defence mode." i have questions about. the first defence is a good offence loving first before expecting love. catching eye contact. unless you have something to be guilty of then your chances are slim. jhl

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/4/2009 12:48:00 PM

Interesting thoughts put to pen. Keep the magical pen flowing. Thanks for the comments on my work. Sara

P Sheart

Date: 12/3/2009 6:06:00 PM

Audrey, a very well written Choka, very profound indeed. Always a pleasure to read your amazing poetry. Ah, when love grows cold....Can be tuff. Thanks for your welcome comments my friend. Happy Holiday season to you. Love Light Patty

James Fraser

Date: 12/3/2009 11:45:00 AM

Audrey, exceptional Choka if i must say >> Soup Mail for you >> James

Richard Pickett

Date: 12/3/2009 8:46:00 AM

If I don't miss my mark this is about the "C" word...Describes it to a T...Thank you for the write...RdP