Indiana Jones

The passionate...pulsating rhythm,
   Of your tasty...temple of doom.
      Pounds a pummeling throb,
         While hunting for buried treasure. 

         A lustrous...look like acid rain,
      A hopeful...heart, a buried jewel.
   My whip...willingly...whips,
A love escapade unwinds.

I raid your beautiful...body
   Looking for the lost ark in the dark.
      Erotic...exploration begins;
         I explore a deeper crevice. 

         Solely...searching a secret tunnel,
      Investigating, probing, and panting,
   In the Kingdom of the Crystal Skull.
With my trusty archeological tool.

Hot wax poured...sizzling burns
   The crimson scented wax streams
      On this secret quest for love, 
         A stimulating last crusade.

         Drops of salty...sweat
      Bead from my fatigued...face  
   Dripping into the abyss of covers 
And on the glistening skin.

Contrast: hitting the shiny...skin
   The splash sound...is amplified.
      A magnified grimace of pleasure
         Protrudes the dark silhouette.

         Steamy...lava skin yearns,
      For a cool touch to extinguish 
   The heat of human friction while
Luscious...lips call out Dr. Jones.



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*Posted for an anonymous request
To write more free verse...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Moreno Avatar
April 1, 2009 at 6:10 PM
You Rock at Free Verse...............Danielle
Ehigiator Avatar
March 29, 2009 at 8:55 PM
Very hot and passionate..MY MY MY,You really went out on this one, Indiana Jones was rockin wild, really wild..You took this free verse to a whole different level..LOL, shocking!!!Incredible imagery here....You took the reader on a passionate journey full of adventure and pleasure..Awesome indeed...Keep em coming, GB Always, Tyesha
Edmonds Avatar
March 29, 2009 at 10:02 AM
This one is funny, but cleverly put together. You crack me up.
De La Keur Avatar
March 29, 2009 at 12:56 AM
You captured that beautifully, again fav poem, 7/7, Aleera
Goombi Avatar
March 28, 2009 at 11:38 PM
An erotic adventure Indy was on, nice word use.
Kelly Avatar
March 28, 2009 at 12:35 AM
Excellent piece , Raul and another side to your writing capability ....
Neal Avatar
March 27, 2009 at 10:02 PM
Enchanting write, masterful free verse, I would also love to see more. Your detail jumps into the mind and paints a vivid picture. Love Elizabeth
Bulger Avatar
March 27, 2009 at 5:14 PM
Ummm... Raul, I was not expecting this from you...lol, good read, I suggest also you do more free verse. You penn well in this form. Lucinda
Weber Avatar
March 27, 2009 at 1:26 PM
This simmers with allusion and adventure between the sheets, my friend, like a well earned conquest. Enjoyable! Warm regards, John.
Gass Avatar
March 27, 2009 at 12:30 PM
Raul, this is a very passionate write filled with great imagery! Very creatively, done! A great response to the request! Love, Robin
Strand Avatar
March 27, 2009 at 8:56 AM
Like the alliteration Raul.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
Devonshire Avatar
March 27, 2009 at 8:28 AM
Passionate work, Raul! I'm seeing a new side of you, and your free verse style is awesome!!
Atanacio Avatar
March 27, 2009 at 8:17 AM
My God this was a ride-- well done
Guzzi Avatar
March 27, 2009 at 8:14 AM
Ma's so proud LOL You go guy! Light & Love Naughty Dorothy please!
Richards Avatar
March 27, 2009 at 8:03 AM
Whoever asked you to post more free verse...did the rest of us a favor!! :) This is awesome!!
Winter Avatar
March 27, 2009 at 5:50 AM
Ok Indiana, you captured my interest with this write! Hmm...lots of interesting visuals here to say the least. Quite exciting and hot! Awesome writing Raul! Love, Shar
Higgins Avatar
March 27, 2009 at 5:08 AM
This is a very steamy interesting write...I am blushing..LOL..great work.
Neal Avatar
March 27, 2009 at 3:03 AM
Steamy write Raul, you can write anything can't you? Your work is fire. DN
Martin Avatar
March 27, 2009 at 2:51 AM
Wow, I'm starting to dig your free verse. A differnt side you haven't posted, nice job. An erotic adventure of Indiana Jones, who would of thought? Only your mind would think of this, keep it up, for real. Tyler
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