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Written 23 November 2025 for The Earth`s Oceans Poetry Contest of Constance La France

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Indian Ocean

“The Indian Ocean, once key to the spice way,
Is now playground of superpowers, every day,
Bent on weaving their web of sway." -By poet                                  ‘
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               Indian Ocean

Blue cradle rocking wide and deep,
     The Indian Ocean from stretched shores peeps,
          Round all seasons simmering with sparkling sunshine,
               Reflecting the sun golden gleam in space and time.

               A link to Afro-Asia and Australia, free,
          And loads of islands, ships cross this sea earnestly, 
     The southerly breeze sweeps across this salty spray
And tempers down the heat of everyday.

Fish simmer and silver lies deep below,
     Where coral gardens gently grow
          While wales softly sing secrets to the tide
               In currents where the shadows hide.

               Turtles glide with gleams of genuine grace,
          Finding solace in this watery space,
     Seahorses dance in swaying weed,
Planting warm hopes and sowing seed.

Yet danger lurks, a hidden threat,
     To diverse marine species, small and great;
          The swirling plastic tide we can`t ever forget
               As it may turn into mankind`s regret.
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Kendrick Avatar
December 1, 2025 at 9:11 AM
Awesome winner. Way to go. Congratulations. Sara K
Alex Avatar
December 1, 2025 at 12:47 AM
"The swirling plastic tide we can`t ever forget As it may turn into mankind`s regret." - It's true. It's a matter of concern. Congratulations!
George Avatar
December 1, 2025 at 12:23 AM
Hearty Congratulations on your top win dear Krish. So happy to have shared the podium with you.
Poet Avatar
November 30, 2025 at 11:57 AM
My poet friend, this poem is a natural wonder that is home to countless underwater creatures. However, there is cause for dread that our oceans are contaminated by excessive plastic usage. Your trophy contest win is really well deserved.
De Beaulieu Avatar
November 27, 2025 at 3:47 PM
Hello Guptar, yes dangers do happen in the oceans, seas, rivers, lakes any body of water where there is life swimming. beneath. Blessings my friend. /Darlene/
De Beaulieu Avatar
November 29, 2025 at 11:19 AM
Hello Guptar, Oh, you are welcome. Yes I am faring well thank you. How are you? thank you for the blessings of your light. Wishing you a good day from Canada. /Darlene blessings my friend.
Guptar Avatar
November 28, 2025 at 11:05 AM
Thank you dear friend for visiting my page and for your kind wishes. Hope that you are faring well. Sending you the blessings of light from my country.
Somadas Avatar
November 26, 2025 at 2:15 AM
a beautiful descriptive poem, Krishnanand.. Good Luck..
George Avatar
November 25, 2025 at 9:35 PM
A beautiful poem on Indian Ocean.... a marvel of nature to behold and a home to umpteen marine species, yet a matter of concern as its cerulean waters is being consistently polluted by plastic sediments and industrial waste. Enjoyed reading your beautifully rhyming poem. All the Best. Love your quote too.
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