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Indian Giving Brother

Received gift one day, from another
Given in love, from older brother
Borrowed back at one time
Not returned, what a crime
Worst Indian giver, than any other

Copyright © Cecil Hickman | Year Posted 2010

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Carol Sunshine Brown

December 27, 2010 at 5:19 PM

Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s Indian Giver contest Cecil. Love, Carol

December 27, 2010 at 6:52 AM

Cecil, many congratulations on your fine win in PD's contest. Have a wonderful 2011 >> James....:)

December 27, 2010 at 6:04 AM

Hi. Congratulations on your deserved honour. Eamon

Andrea Dietrich

December 27, 2010 at 12:01 AM

Love your limerick form, Cecil. Congrats on the winner circle. LUv, Andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

December 26, 2010 at 5:16 PM

Congrats Cecil on your big win in PD;s contest with this awesome entry my friend.. enjoy with luv and a Happy New Year too..

December 26, 2010 at 10:48 AM

This is a unique Limerick in it own right, Cecil. Congratulations on your worthy poem's honored place. Agape, Moses

December 26, 2010 at 7:44 AM

clever, funny one, cecil... CHEERS for bagging an award in PD’s contest!... huggs, nette

December 26, 2010 at 5:53 AM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

December 26, 2010 at 5:36 AM

Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of PD, cecil

Poet Destroyer A

December 25, 2010 at 11:23 PM

CECIL,, CONGRATULATIONS I had so much fun reading every entry. Some where serious and awesome, hope you are enjoying your holidays,..p.d.

Francine Roberts

December 2, 2010 at 10:26 PM

cute one , good luck in the contest

Poet Destroyer A

December 2, 2010 at 7:27 PM

oh! boy, sorry for the early reading,, loved it,, now, that is the idea of the contest,, enjoyed,..p.d.

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