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Independent

if i could stop
the world i wouldnt i
 would only regenerate 
the fazes of reality.
 
if i could create
life, i wouldnt
i would only
expand the mind of humans.
 
if i could be president
i wouldnt i would only
dedicate myself to the
people i encounter.
 
if i could make people love me
I....... would but seeing
that i cant destroys that idea
makes me weaker knowing that
im not loved, but it makes me
stronger knowing i love myself and
someone else.
I am INDEPENDENT!!!!!!

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Skat A

May 9, 2013 at 9:21 PM

Jaremy, your poem is very enjoyable, :-) Wishing you a nice warm welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best in your writings. I hope you find this community to be one of the best. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself? If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please look me up by clicking on my name anytime you're on line. I'm looking forward in becoming your #1 poetry soup fan. Please keep me posted every time you post a poem <3 LUV ~*~SKAT"

Anne-Lise Andresen

May 3, 2013 at 7:24 AM

Thank you for your fine poem, you write very well Jaremy. - Welcome to P-Soup. - Hope you will get much pleasure from sharing your thoughts and poems here with us. - Wish you all the best. - (Give comments, to get back) - Have a lovely weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

May 2, 2013 at 9:21 PM

about your poem: wow..i love the idea of destroying the idea of love.. LOL... You are independent, and that is xool.I know of many people on my life who are not... :-( your poem rocks.. enjoyed the first poem you posted on the soup...xox~ Linda

Poet Destroyer A

May 2, 2013 at 9:20 PM

Jaremy, , Welcome to poetry soup. My name is Linda; many poets on the soup call me PD for fun. If you like, please consider checking out my contest in the future. SOME ARE FUN : -) You can find the contest page by clicking on the top left hand side. You will find many different contests to choose from. I’m looking forward in reading and following your poems right now and the future. If you ever want or need feedback on a certain poem, please look me up. I can't wait to read what you highly recommend. You can always stop by and say hi if you like. Keep me posted when you post your next poem…. Thank you ~ Always & Forever *LINDA