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Independence Day

Come let's celebrate the fourth of July With baseball, hot dogs, and Mom's apple pie We're sure to ignite Fireworks at night So head on over, we'll light up the sky

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Date: 7/5/2015 10:53:00 AM
Wow! A great celebration indeed my dear friend, Tim. I enjoyed your poem so much. Thanks a lot for sharing and Belated Happy 4th of July! Btw, thank you so much as well for sharing your precious time to read my latest poem. love lots and big hug, Leonora
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Date: 7/5/2015 7:57:00 AM
Very good, Tim. Americans really celebrate Independence Day. Ours is celebrated much more quietly. Hope you had a great 4th!
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Date: 7/3/2015 7:17:00 PM
Sounds wonderful Tim!! A Perfect Limerick indeed on America's Special Day!! Say Hello to the USA for me since I'm over here in Germany. My thoughts on the 4th, however, will be with my family, relatives, and friends back in the USA and the big celebration on this day for all of the great things our country stands for as the Home of Democracy and Land of the Brave!! Best Always, Gary
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Date: 7/3/2015 7:07:00 PM
Nicely written limerick Tim... I trust the celebrations will be immense up your way - Lindsay
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Date: 7/3/2015 7:11:00 PM
Thanks Lindsay...The fireworks have been going off for days and with it falling on a Saturday....it will be crazy
Date: 7/3/2015 6:43:00 PM
Tim, this is a great independence day limerick, a sure winner, 10 and thanks for visiting my poetry
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Date: 7/3/2015 7:09:00 PM
Thank you BW...have a great weekend
Date: 7/3/2015 6:13:00 PM
Tim, enjoyed your limerick. Tomorrow I will be master of the fireworks for our neighborhood.. We're going to light up the sky big time!
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Date: 7/3/2015 6:15:00 PM
Have a blast and be safe Dave
Date: 7/3/2015 4:27:00 PM
I like both hot dog and apple pie ..I do have a baseball hat too..So a toast to celebrations . : ).Lovely Limerick.
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Date: 7/3/2015 4:29:00 PM
I have over 50 baseball hats : ) ... If you like I'll send you one...cheers to celebrations....hugs Tim
Date: 7/3/2015 4:14:00 PM
Very well written. Your patriotic feelings surface and carry the emotional force behind your friendly words. Emile.
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Date: 7/3/2015 4:30:00 PM
Thank you my friend...Tim
Date: 7/3/2015 3:23:00 PM
A great limerick for the fourth of July, Tim! Love, Kim
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Tim Smith
Date: 7/3/2015 4:33:00 PM
Enjoy your fourth Kim : )
Date: 7/3/2015 2:05:00 PM
very cute and with great rhythm!!
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Tim Smith
Date: 7/3/2015 4:36:00 PM
Thanks Andrea !!
Date: 7/3/2015 2:05:00 PM
You should do an acrostic one now, for the contest!
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