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Independence Day

Come let's celebrate the fourth of July
With baseball, hot dogs, and Mom's apple pie
We're sure to ignite
Fireworks at night
So head on over, we'll light up the sky

Copyright © Tim Smith | Year Posted 2015

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Len Gasun Date: 7/5/2015 10:53:00 AM Wow! A great celebration indeed my dear friend, Tim. I enjoyed your poem so much. Thanks a lot for sharing and Belated Happy 4th of July! Btw, thank you so much as well for sharing your precious time to read my latest poem. love lots and big hug, Leonora Login to Reply

Kp Nunez Date: 7/5/2015 7:57:00 AM Very good, Tim. Americans really celebrate Independence Day. Ours is celebrated much more quietly. Hope you had a great 4th! Login to Reply

Gary Bateman Date: 7/3/2015 7:17:00 PM Sounds wonderful Tim!! A Perfect Limerick indeed on America's Special Day!! Say Hello to the USA for me since I'm over here in Germany. My thoughts on the 4th, however, will be with my family, relatives, and friends back in the USA and the big celebration on this day for all of the great things our country stands for as the Home of Democracy and Land of the Brave!! Best Always, Gary Login to Reply

Lindsay Laurie Date: 7/3/2015 7:07:00 PM Nicely written limerick Tim... I trust the celebrations will be immense up your way - Lindsay Login to Reply Tim Smith Date: 7/3/2015 7:11:00 PM Thanks Lindsay...The fireworks have been going off for days and with it falling on a Saturday....it will be crazy

Constance La France Date: 7/3/2015 6:43:00 PM Tim, this is a great independence day limerick, a sure winner, 10 and thanks for visiting my poetry Login to Reply Tim Smith Date: 7/3/2015 7:09:00 PM Thank you BW...have a great weekend

Charmaine Chircop Date: 7/3/2015 4:27:00 PM I like both hot dog and apple pie ..I do have a baseball hat too..So a toast to celebrations . : ).Lovely Limerick. Login to Reply Tim Smith Date: 7/3/2015 4:29:00 PM I have over 50 baseball hats : ) ... If you like I'll send you one...cheers to celebrations....hugs Tim

Emile Pinet Date: 7/3/2015 4:14:00 PM Very well written. Your patriotic feelings surface and carry the emotional force behind your friendly words. Emile. Login to Reply Tim Smith Date: 7/3/2015 4:30:00 PM Thank you my friend...Tim

Kim Merryman Date: 7/3/2015 3:23:00 PM A great limerick for the fourth of July, Tim! Love, Kim Login to Reply Tim Smith Date: 7/3/2015 4:33:00 PM Enjoy your fourth Kim : )

Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/3/2015 2:05:00 PM very cute and with great rhythm!! Login to Reply Tim Smith Date: 7/3/2015 4:36:00 PM Thanks Andrea !!

Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/3/2015 2:05:00 PM You should do an acrostic one now, for the contest! Login to Reply