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Independence

Isle of Man is my home  - it is a Crown Dependency and is  
Not owned by the United Kingdom. 
Democracy – we claim to be the oldest continual Parliament in the world!
Every year on 5th July we celebrate Tynwald Day
Proclaiming our new laws in an open air sitting of our Parliament
Eleven O’clock is when the church ceremony begins then the 
Norse tradition of promulgating the laws takes place on Tynwald Hill
Deemster’s participate in the ceremony, wearing scarlet robes and long wigs
Elizabeth our Queen last attended the ceremony in 2003
National anthem ‘O land of our Birth’ is sung with such pride
Cushag the national flower is worn on this special day
Evening ends with a spectacular firework display, which fills the skies

Contest: Celebrate Independence – Kim Merryman
07~18~15
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Merryman Avatar
July 23, 2015 at 9:32 AM
Jan, it was a pleasure to read about your country and how they celebrate on Tynwald Day! Thank you for sharing! Congrats on your placement in my contest! Love, Kim
Allison Avatar
July 23, 2015 at 9:35 AM
Many thanks for a great contest Kim:-) hugs Jan xx
Y. Avatar
July 23, 2015 at 8:40 AM
Jan, I stopped by to say congratulations your awesome win:-)Alexis
Allison Avatar
July 23, 2015 at 8:41 AM
Thanks Alexis:-) hugs jan xx
A. Sharma Avatar
July 23, 2015 at 1:57 AM
Congrats on ur winning awesome write Jan ! Great acrostic!
Allison Avatar
July 23, 2015 at 2:02 AM
Thanks Dr Sharma:-) hugs Jan xx
Terry Avatar
July 23, 2015 at 1:44 AM
Congratulations on your win, Jan. The Isle of Man must be a great place to write poetry because yours is exceptional. ÷ ) Janece
Allison Avatar
July 23, 2015 at 2:02 AM
Oh that is a lovely comment thank you Janece - I am blessed my husband's cancer has released a creative streak I never wrote before his surgery in November 2013 - since I joined the site it is like a tap has been turned on and I never want it to stop:-) hugs Jan xx
A  Avatar
July 23, 2015 at 12:37 AM
jan, congratulations on your win. Awesome Acrostic. Love SKAT
Allison Avatar
July 23, 2015 at 2:00 AM
Thanks Skat:-) Hugs Jan xx
Roper Avatar
July 22, 2015 at 10:18 PM
Congratulations on your win,Jan, I've learned a lot from your write. Hugs Eve
Allison Avatar
July 23, 2015 at 1:59 AM
Oh thanks Eve i didn't know it had been judged:-) hugs jan xx
Makama Avatar
July 22, 2015 at 11:47 AM
this is an awesome piece. Its nice visiting your pages once again. Definitely a 7!
Allison Avatar
July 22, 2015 at 11:52 AM
Thanks so much Funom:-)hugs Jan xx
Pinet Avatar
July 20, 2015 at 11:27 AM
You have a gift in telling a story that lets the reader feel a part of what is unfolding before them. Very well written. Emile. #7
Allison Avatar
July 20, 2015 at 11:32 AM
Thanks Emile - Tynwald day a very special day and the best way I could honour it was in this poem about Independence - so glad you enjoyed my write:-) hugs Jan xx
Thirtyseven Avatar
July 20, 2015 at 7:32 AM
Right on the money I'd say, best of luck in the comp. And thanks for teaching me something about the Isle of Man that I didn't know.
Allison Avatar
July 20, 2015 at 7:37 AM
We may be a small Island Scott but we still uphold the traditions here:-) hugs jan xx
Trifiatis Avatar
July 19, 2015 at 9:35 AM
Very informative and, the history in a nutshell. Enjoyed it, Jan. I have to come there next time. Good luck!
Allison Avatar
July 19, 2015 at 9:37 AM
Thanks Demetrios:-) hugs Jan xx
Laurie Avatar
July 19, 2015 at 12:57 AM
G'day Jan... I'm off to Mr. Google. You've whet my appetite good and proper Jan. Enjoy your celebration - Lindsay
Allison Avatar
July 19, 2015 at 4:03 AM
It poured with rain this year Lindsay - I don't go - done it once and that's my duty done - its a bank holiday on that day so I chill at home and listen on the radio:-) hugs jan xx
A. Sharma Avatar
July 18, 2015 at 11:41 PM
Wonderful expressions Jan! Gl in contest!
Allison Avatar
July 19, 2015 at 4:00 AM
thanks Dr Sharma:-) hugs jan xx
Dietrich Avatar
July 18, 2015 at 7:33 PM
you did a great job describing this day and informing us more about your lovely region. I really love where you live,Jan!! Kim should love this one too.
Allison Avatar
July 18, 2015 at 7:35 PM
Thanks Andrea thought I would give the contest a go and let you know a little about our Independence day:-)hugs Jan xx
Hunjeri Avatar
July 18, 2015 at 5:30 PM
Awesome! Now i know a little bit more about you. All the best in the contest Jan
Allison Avatar
July 18, 2015 at 5:32 PM
Thanks Njeri:-) hugs Jan xx
Fraser Avatar
July 18, 2015 at 3:33 PM
Fine tribute to the IOM Jan, nice, James xx
Allison Avatar
July 18, 2015 at 3:47 PM
Thanks James I guess you feel the same way about Scotland:-) hugs Jan xx
Smith Avatar
July 18, 2015 at 3:07 PM
A spectacular tribute to your land Jan
Allison Avatar
July 18, 2015 at 3:20 PM
Thanks Tim - my hubby works on the broadcasting of annual ceremony - a totally unique historical event:-) hugs Jan xx
Vaso Avatar
July 18, 2015 at 2:27 PM
Each poem you write about this place, makes me more determined to visit!!!! :)
Allison Avatar
July 18, 2015 at 2:45 PM
It is tiny tiny tiny but perfectly formed Arthur am sure you would love it:-) hugs Jan xx
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 18, 2015 at 1:53 PM
Islands hold a special place in my heart, living on one myself. I so enjoyed learning about yours. I would love seeing this celebration one day. This is a terrific entry Jan!
Allison Avatar
July 18, 2015 at 2:05 PM
Thanks Connie - I am so glad you enjoyed my poem - it is fascinating learning about different traditions:-) hugs jan xx
Christian-Bowling Avatar
July 18, 2015 at 1:25 PM
It must be so beautiful where you live Jan....I've wanted for a long time to visit the isle of man....Maybe one day I will ...Just maybe -Love Ettie
Allison Avatar
July 18, 2015 at 2:02 PM
Small but perfectly formed Ettie lol I just wish the weather was a little warmer some days:-) hugs jan xx
Rv Avatar
July 18, 2015 at 12:39 PM
This is marvellous, dear Jan!! All the best in the contest!! :D :D
Allison Avatar
July 18, 2015 at 1:16 PM
Thanks Sneha so glad you enjoyed it:-) hugs Jan xx
Gifford Avatar
July 18, 2015 at 9:06 AM
I enjoyed reading this informative poem, Jan about your Aisle of Man, your home. Wonderfully written and educational, too. Your National Anthem "O Land of our Birth," I want to read the words. I'll check the internet and see if I can find the song. And I've never heard of your National flower, Cushag. I'll check that out, too. A 7 and best to you in the contest....Darlene
Allison Avatar
July 18, 2015 at 9:09 AM
Thanks Darlene I thought you would enjoy it after I read your lovely comment on the flag poem:-) hugs jan xx
Stoner Jr Avatar
July 18, 2015 at 9:05 AM
That was a difficult topic to provide for sure. I think you presented the work in a format very pleasant and artfully. Thanks for the visit to your graced land.
Allison Avatar
July 18, 2015 at 9:08 AM
Thanks Robert I hope learned a little more about our Island :-) hugs jan xx
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