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Indecision

I gaze longingly out of the dusted covered window panes... You take your leave...once again... Where do you wander off to? So late at night... Wrapped in a world of make believe is where I am must go to ponder and seek release... Have you forgotten your dear sweet love awaiting your arrival again? If not for literature or my precious poems I would be fallen... Like a flower that has withered away into nothing... Wrapped in a world of make believe is where I must go to ponder and seek release... Shall I lay in wait anxiously?-continue to lament for you... Where so when you finally show your face...you care not for me...Your words once had power to heal... now your words are meant for destruction... Wrapped in a world of make believe is where I must go to ponder and seek release...

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Date: 1/1/2015 9:17:00 AM
Nice flow, great composition. We must write what we know. Our hearts are so fragile but sometimes from pain flows our art.
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Meg Anderson
Date: 1/1/2015 12:54:00 PM
Very true! Thank you.
Date: 12/30/2014 6:38:00 PM
I see such immense beauty in your words, you must not be real! Are you make believe? :) hugs
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Date: 12/30/2014 6:53:00 PM
Lol. Very real. Thanks.
Date: 12/28/2014 11:49:00 PM
I really liked the expressions. It left me speechless because you were amazing at it. :) I'm trying not to use a lot of the typical teenage phrases so it looks like my comment is more, um, sincere in a way. Because it is, your poem is incredible. ??
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Meg Anderson
Date: 12/29/2014 6:01:00 AM
Amy, wow well thank you so much. I get inspired by different events or when things happen in my life and that's when the words just flow out onto paper (or in this case my tablet, lol). That's nice of you to read and share!
Date: 12/28/2014 4:40:00 PM
He must be blind and dumb . . . your beauty flows through your words. Hugs. 7
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Meg Anderson
Date: 12/28/2014 6:17:00 PM
David, awe thank you so much! That means a lot. Sometimes my only solace are my words! Meg
Date: 12/28/2014 1:06:00 PM
A drama that is played out nightly all over the "civilized" world, i should say. A stark warning to many couples who take their partner for granted! :) john.
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Meg Anderson
Date: 12/28/2014 1:09:00 PM
Yes. Thank you John. It's a sad story.

Book: Shattered Sighs