Indecision

I think about you every day.
It hurts to leave.
It hurts to stay.
If you knew I'm not ok.
Maybe then I would choose to stay.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Bangalee Avatar
April 15, 2021 at 10:41 PM
indecisiveness sometimes indicates the best way to live!
Krutsinger Avatar
April 24, 2020 at 9:28 PM
Welcome to Soup. Brevity says quite a lot here.
Ben Zion Bertrand Avatar
April 25, 2020 at 4:07 AM
Thank you for your words Caren, and the much appreciated welcome.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
April 24, 2020 at 8:40 AM
Oh that cuts; a deep, very deep incision. Potent, excellent ink! Welcome to the soup Asher, I like your style. xomo
Ben Zion Bertrand Avatar
April 24, 2020 at 10:22 AM
Thank you very much for your feedback. And the warm welcome. :)
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