Indecision

I think about you every day. It hurts to leave. It hurts to stay. If you knew I'm not ok. Maybe then I would choose to stay.

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Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 4/15/2021 10:41:00 PM

indecisiveness sometimes indicates the best way to live!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 4/24/2020 9:28:00 PM

Welcome to Soup. Brevity says quite a lot here.

Asher Ben Zion Bertrand
Date: 4/25/2020 4:07:00 AM

Thank you for your words Caren, and the much appreciated welcome.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 4/24/2020 8:40:00 AM

Oh that cuts; a deep, very deep incision. Potent, excellent ink! Welcome to the soup Asher, I like your style. xomo

Asher Ben Zion Bertrand
Date: 4/24/2020 10:22:00 AM

Thank you very much for your feedback. And the warm welcome. :)