Paul Callus Poet Free verse

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Indecision

Enticed
          by feminine allure
          my resistance 
          crumbles
          like a house of cards. 

          On brief reflection
          I contemplate
          the repercussion
          of total surrender
          or hurried retreat.

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          © 17th March 2018

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Laura Breidenthal May 10, 2018 at 10:59 AM Sounds like a strong, healthy mind contemplating their next move in the face of temptation. Nice little verse! Always, Laura Paul Callus May 10, 2018 at 2:33 PM Thank you for sharing your thoughts, Laura. Regards // paul

Agnes Krampe April 10, 2018 at 7:43 PM How intriguing, Paul - I wonder which you chose. Paul Callus May 10, 2018 at 2:02 PM Hi Agnes, I am sure that I replied to this comment ages ago, yet there is nothing to show for it! Thank you for patiently waiting for an answer:) Usually I don't give up that easily, so probably no thoughts of a hurried retreat ! Regards // paul

Robert Lindley April 10, 2018 at 6:24 AM Wisdom dictates the benefits of caution and prudence but oft love demands both be tossed aside my friend. And if its true love from both involved no earthly treasure measure up to its blessings. Yet something to be said for a judicious and well timed retreat. A fav... Paul Callus April 10, 2018 at 9:07 AM Your insightful comments are the fruit of experience, my friend! Thank you for yet another pleasant visit, Robert. Regards // paul

Maria Williams March 21, 2018 at 11:42 PM Oh we only live this life once, take the total surrender Paul. And as my mum used to say...'be brave, take a chance, the sweetest fruit hang from the farthest branch',...something like that Lol. Love how you convey so much in such few words. this is brilliant and a fave....Maria Hugs Paul Callus March 23, 2018 at 8:20 AM Your mum's words are meant to be heeded, Maria...so is your advice! Thank you for yet another pleasant visit:) Regards // paul

FJ Thomas March 21, 2018 at 8:02 PM Ahhh but which did you choose dear Paul?! :) Beautifully done. Paul Callus March 23, 2018 at 4:58 AM Thank you Shadow:) I have never been one to accept defeat that easily! I see a change of avatar...confirms the fact that some lips are unmistakable:) Warm regards // paul

Freddie Robinson Jr. March 21, 2018 at 3:29 PM Brilliant self-introspection poetry, Paul. Your pen shines w/subtle pastel hues of insight. LOVE this poem. Your talent never relents or surrender to the mundane. Love and joy always. Paul Callus March 21, 2018 at 4:01 PM Thank you for the gifted words, Freddie...you are too generous! All the best...paul

Maurice Yvonne March 20, 2018 at 11:16 AM Wow, a stunning piece Paul. I love to fav your poetry because you make such a great mentor for those still learning. As an aside If you have time could you please check out my newest poem. I need some help from my friends on a new project I have embarked on. Thank you. Paul Callus March 20, 2018 at 2:06 PM Thank you for the generous comments and fav, Armand. Congratulations on the video, and all the best for the project ahead. Regards // paul

Janis Medders Tobechi March 18, 2018 at 5:03 PM Most men I meet are on hurried retreat. Love this poetry. Paul Callus March 19, 2018 at 1:53 PM It's their loss, Sian:) But not all men are like that....take Danny for instance...maybe I could act as go-between:) Thank you for a pleasant visit. Regards // paul Daniel Turner March 19, 2018 at 2:38 AM You haven't met me yet. I promise I won't run:) Most likely buy you an ice cream or a soda if you like. Now who's retreating?

Akkina Downing March 18, 2018 at 12:52 PM Oh how lovely this is! Great to see you again Paul... hugs :) Paul Callus March 18, 2018 at 1:40 PM Thank you for your lovely reaction, Akkina:) Pleased to have you stopping by. Hugs & smiles // paul

Silent One March 18, 2018 at 10:25 AM Always tread carefully my friend... well expressed.. Paul Callus March 18, 2018 at 1:38 PM Treading with caution makes sense, but isn't love supposed to be blind!! Regards // paul

Vijay Pandit March 18, 2018 at 6:45 AM Total surrender friend! Well written contemplation!! Paul Callus March 18, 2018 at 1:37 PM You sound very sure of your choice, Vijay:) I think I'll heed your advice:) Regards // paul

Tom Cunningham March 18, 2018 at 2:38 AM Lovely thought provoking verse Paul, what is this spell they have over us ? You can run but you can't hide. Tom Paul Callus March 18, 2018 at 1:36 PM I enjoyed your candid comments, Tom, especially the last one:) Thank you for handing over a smile:) Regards // paul

Viv Wigley March 18, 2018 at 2:09 AM Moral of the story, Paul- take up knitting. Much safer. Fine little write, regards, Viv Paul Callus March 18, 2018 at 1:34 PM Oh...but I did take up knitting when I was young, Viv!! My mum got us all to learn sewing, knitting, cooking, etc. Had I to live on my own I'd have no problems:) Regards // paul

Daniel Turner March 17, 2018 at 10:13 PM It's a shell game one hardly ever wins, Paul, and I still haven't decided if the good outweighs the bad. A most enjoyable poem. a pleasure to read. Paul Callus March 18, 2018 at 11:08 AM Thank you, Danny. Some things are best left to fate! Regards // paul

Connie Marcum Wong March 17, 2018 at 8:53 PM This poem is enchanting Paul. She does look quite irresistible. Love it Paul! Paul Callus March 18, 2018 at 10:56 AM You are too generous, Connie...but I'll willingly accept the compliment:) Thank you! Regards // paul

Susan Ashley March 17, 2018 at 7:36 PM The thoughts that speed through one's mind when caught at a crossroads.. Paul, you are masterful at presenting these poetic quandaries wrapped in the allure of your intriguing poetry. I absolutely love your irresistible style. A superb write my friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan Paul Callus March 18, 2018 at 10:46 AM Thank you, Susan; your insightful comments are truly cherished:) Hope you're having a lovely weekend! Warm regards // paul

Line Gauthier March 17, 2018 at 7:04 PM A wise man is always cautious, dear Paul. Touching poem. Paul Callus March 17, 2018 at 7:17 PM Thank you, Line. Your comments and advice are much appreciated:) Goodnight // paul