Indalomena Mnemosyna

'The silence of Marcel Duchamp is overrated'
All that chess-
Recall for a moment
That idle chit-chat,
That verbal bric-a-brac,
such flamboyant suppositional consciousness,
Let it noodle around the edges-
Blow this metaphor off.
Ratings challenge lies.
The deep magenta shadows,
The haze of grass smoke
'My face is my own, I thought'.
We need to remember,
Weaving around caftans
with a duodecimal swivel-
I think of Ben Johnson
And 'Shards of God',
Who is Hanibal?
Collapsing the elements,
My question is a part of the point of these lines,
A faked head,
Gaslight,
A form of women,
I can do nothing.
Other discourses speak on it's behalf,
There is a cost to the silent critique,
'The silence of Marcel Duchamp is overrated'.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2007



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Date: 8/4/2009 5:10:00 PM
The title comes from the names of two nymphs in the Hypnerotomachia Poliphili (meaning Poliphilo's search for love in a dream) that I studied with a friend at uni. It seemed apt to use them for the title of this since the poem is about how the imagination works from one idea to another in a dream-state. Indalomena means fantasy and imagination while mnemosyna means memory so the title is roughly 'imagined memory' which is how we always look back at really vivid dreams once we wake.
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Date: 7/28/2009 9:39:00 AM
Indalomena????Mnemosyne..the Mother of Muses? Please educate me..send soup mail. Those who don't know want to know. Light & Love
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