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Incubus

Bringing sins from my past
Into the present, a twinkling
Filling my thoughts, sprinkling
My heart in shadows to last

This feeling, this darkness
Colors my feelings in black
Doubt comes with it to attack
Leaving my heart with starkness

It brings depression and sorrow
Beyond any fears, tears or years
Silenced by the blackest affairs
Worrying the joyous in tomorrow

With his evil destruction, he abides
In the appalling abysmal of doubt
Where he feeds on every burn out
Thrives on the corruption, his guide

Some call him the devil, the fraud
Who invents new sins to upset you
Leaving hearts feeling less than blue
he just wishes he could be like God

He is my enemy from everlasting
I never want to give him the chance
To whisper his terrifying mischance
Through me, so sin is overcasting

I won’t give him the benefit of the doubt
I know his taunting is my heart’s rival
When he comes around, I need revival
So next time he takes another route

Listen to my prayer – today and forever
With God, all things are possible
So this road to my soul is uncrossable 
Because I know God, he’s not so clever!




Pick-A-Title, Vol 35 Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh
1. Incubus
March 9, 2023
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Ibeh Avatar
March 26, 2023 at 8:02 AM
Heartiest congratulations on your top win in my contest with this fantastic poem, Regina:-) Your writes never disappoint!
Poet Avatar
March 24, 2023 at 7:38 PM
Regina, many hearty congratulations on your first-place win! Spotless vibes you portray.
Fowler Avatar
March 24, 2023 at 8:08 AM
Back with big congratulations on your win Gina! :)
Goldsmith Avatar
March 23, 2023 at 1:55 PM
Congratulations on the win. A wonderful story/write. Love your ending. Have a blessed day writing..............
Ayantika Avatar
March 23, 2023 at 11:17 AM
Congratulations on your win, Regina. Your insight is inspiring in itself
Fowler Avatar
March 11, 2023 at 8:11 AM
Great entry for the contest Gina. Satan cannot win a pure heart. :)
Johnson Avatar
March 10, 2023 at 10:31 AM
The constant shades of inner turmoil, besiege us till our blood starts to boil. With hope and prayer we fight the good fight. And forgiving ourselves is our one true plight. Nice to share in the journey that normal societal inner action doesn't always allow in polite conversation. Well Done.
Poet Avatar
March 9, 2023 at 6:24 AM
Your expertise and insight never disappoint, Gina and this is an exceptionally well-made poem. Good luck with the contest
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