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Incredible Ooze

collect and carry the weight of fallen stars the flesh is a trophy case for a thousand battle scars flashes of bright intelligence fiend for tight excellence play cursed melodies to summon the beasts within the black bizarre oozing atrocities supernatural qualities high velocity super high on chaotic properties excited chemicals gathering as a pool of miracles coliseum ancient spectacles consume rhymes like raw vegetable edibles months feeling the effects of astounding residuals is this what it's like to be incredible

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Date: 12/14/2014 7:32:00 AM
Quite the write, Sebastian...Quite the write. :)
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Sebastian Aaron Baez
Date: 12/14/2014 10:26:00 AM
Thank you Eileen! I'm starting to feel a little more confident about my writing skills :) but there is room for much improvement.
Date: 12/13/2014 5:41:00 PM
HOt damn baby you are good!
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Sebastian Aaron Baez
Date: 12/13/2014 8:04:00 PM
:) I know! I mean I kinda know, don't want to sound all conceited and stuff!

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