Incredible Ooze

collect and carry
the weight of fallen stars
the flesh is a trophy case
for a thousand battle scars
flashes of bright intelligence
fiend for tight excellence
play cursed melodies to summon
the beasts within the black bizarre

oozing atrocities
supernatural qualities
high velocity
super high on chaotic properties

excited chemicals
gathering as a pool of miracles
coliseum ancient spectacles
consume rhymes like raw vegetable edibles
months feeling the effects
of astounding residuals
is this what it's like to be incredible
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Manassian Avatar
December 14, 2014 at 7:32 AM
Quite the write, Sebastian...Quite the write. :)
Baez Avatar
December 14, 2014 at 10:26 AM
Thank you Eileen! I'm starting to feel a little more confident about my writing skills :) but there is room for much improvement.
Nance Avatar
December 13, 2014 at 5:41 PM
HOt damn baby you are good!
Baez Avatar
December 13, 2014 at 8:04 PM
:) I know! I mean I kinda know, don't want to sound all conceited and stuff!
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace