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Incomprehensible

dark universe
mysterious muse
what lies beyond your edge?






Get in touch with your zen poetry contest
sponsored by Richard Lamoureux 
21st October 2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Keady Avatar
June 27, 2020 at 7:26 PM
Mmm... now there is a puzzle.. Would love to know the answer to that cryptic...! A really great write as always EP... I hope all is well with you and yours.. Best Wishes. DAMOx
Theraven Avatar
January 6, 2020 at 7:44 PM
Elaine, Back to read some poetry and also to wish you a Happy New Year for 2020. -Richard
Perrin Avatar
April 28, 2020 at 3:21 AM
Thanks Richard :-) I’ve been away for a while but trying to get back into it. Hope you’re all ok x
Lawless Avatar
November 14, 2019 at 7:19 AM
The constant concern of the "Flat Earth Society".....I like this one, it leaves the reader to peer into the darkness....and wonder...Well done
Perrin Avatar
April 28, 2020 at 3:21 AM
Thank you John :-) x
Lamoureux Avatar
November 12, 2019 at 7:31 AM
Yes, I am well. Thanks for asking. I hope you are as well.
Perrin Avatar
November 13, 2019 at 4:18 AM
Very glad to hear it ;-) x
Dietrich Avatar
November 1, 2019 at 7:54 PM
Loving this one again. Big congrats.
Perrin Avatar
November 12, 2019 at 4:47 AM
Thank you :-) xx
Andresen Avatar
November 1, 2019 at 2:20 PM
- Congratulations on your great "Zen" line, Elaine :) - Well done :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Perrin Avatar
November 12, 2019 at 4:45 AM
Thank you lovely :-) xx
Sands Avatar
November 1, 2019 at 11:32 AM
Congratulations for your win Elaine :)
Perrin Avatar
November 12, 2019 at 4:43 AM
Thanks Heidi :-) x
Rodrigues Avatar
November 1, 2019 at 9:02 AM
Great! Congratulations!
Perrin Avatar
November 12, 2019 at 4:42 AM
Thank you Kim :-) x
Lawless Avatar
November 1, 2019 at 9:00 AM
OH.....WHAT A PICTURE....
Perrin Avatar
November 12, 2019 at 4:35 AM
Thank you John :-) x
Lamoureux Avatar
November 1, 2019 at 8:44 AM
Congrats on top place In my contest. ;0) thanksfor entering my contest.
Perrin Avatar
November 12, 2019 at 4:13 AM
Thank you so much Richard. Hope you are well :-) x
Theraven Avatar
October 28, 2019 at 10:53 AM
Elaine, What lies beyond., Zen universal riddle indeed. -Richard
Perrin Avatar
November 12, 2019 at 4:26 AM
Thank You for your visit Richard :-) x
Wolf Avatar
October 27, 2019 at 3:16 PM
Profound question. Nicely done, Elaine. :) gw
Perrin Avatar
November 12, 2019 at 4:41 AM
Thank you so much Gershon :-) xx
Wolf Avatar
November 4, 2019 at 5:33 PM
Congrats to you on your win in the contest with this timeless question! Warm wishes, Gershon
Inman Avatar
October 26, 2019 at 10:32 PM
Deep and mysterious.
Perrin Avatar
November 12, 2019 at 4:31 AM
Thank you James :-) x
Adams Avatar
October 24, 2019 at 8:06 PM
great question....one never knows with a muse....
Perrin Avatar
October 25, 2019 at 7:15 AM
Thank you Sandra :-) x
Dietrich Avatar
October 22, 2019 at 6:14 PM
very good question indeed, Elaine.
Perrin Avatar
October 23, 2019 at 4:01 AM
Thank you lovely lady :-) x
Robinson Jr. Avatar
October 22, 2019 at 2:27 PM
Super cool Questionku, Elaine. The quest for knowledge begins at foolish ways wandering end. Love and peace always.
Perrin Avatar
October 23, 2019 at 4:02 AM
Thanks so much Freddie :-) x
Salehi Avatar
October 22, 2019 at 12:10 PM
Oneness...
Perrin Avatar
October 23, 2019 at 4:03 AM
Thank you for your visit Pashang :-) x
Callus Avatar
October 22, 2019 at 9:13 AM
An excellent Questionku, Elaine. Now you've got me pondering....:) Regards // paul
Perrin Avatar
October 23, 2019 at 4:03 AM
I glad you like it Paul, thank you :-) x
Faulkner Avatar
October 21, 2019 at 1:57 PM
great final line, intriguing! Best of luck in the contest, Elaine-
Perrin Avatar
October 21, 2019 at 2:00 PM
Thank you Michelle :-) x
Cunningham Avatar
October 21, 2019 at 9:59 AM
That's an interesting one Elaine a question I couldn't answer. Good luck. Tom
Perrin Avatar
October 21, 2019 at 10:27 AM
Thank you Tom :-) x
Green Avatar
October 21, 2019 at 9:52 AM
This was really cool. Best wishes in the contest.
Perrin Avatar
October 21, 2019 at 10:26 AM
Thank you Chris :-) x
Sands Avatar
October 21, 2019 at 9:06 AM
Great one Elaine :)
Perrin Avatar
October 21, 2019 at 9:09 AM
Thank you Heidi :-) x
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