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Redolent, posh lyrics have hidden flaws. Surrounded by a rusty sapphire sanctuary That dampened the beauteous bronze glow. Gold-sparkly afterglows can be sumptuary. Surrounded by a rusty sapphire sanctuary with acidic pollens and nervous neon wisps Gold-sparkly afterglows can be sumptuary. built an array of dark and wicked tale tips. With acidic pollens and nervous neon wisps Where platinum wings are tightly encased, built by an array of dark and wicked tale tips. With ash, in the dawn of solace, unlaced. Where platinum wings are tightly encased, I wake anxious, wailing rain, loving the flute. With ash, in the dawn of solace, unlaced. Melding dark poem of doom into wool toot. I wake anxious, wailing rain, loving the flute. That dampened the beauteous bronze glow. Melding dark poem of doom into wool toot. Redolent, posh lyrics have hidden flaws.
Written: January 27, 2023

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Date: 1/28/2023 1:13:00 PM
Oh, Your Pantoum is gorgeous, Lasaad! You navigated the lines so beautifully. This is a fav!
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Date: 1/28/2023 5:28:00 AM
Words dwelling in beautiful surroundings. Lovely write, Lasaad.
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Date: 1/27/2023 10:32:00 PM
Your poem is anything but incomplete :)
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