Incomplete By Collice Rodrigues

Even though you sit so close to me
Seems together happy we could never be
As hard I try to get you close
I get pricked by the thorn of the stem of a rose

Your tear drop feels like a thousand pins
I’d rather burn to ashes for my countless sins
You’re a Lily on the water, to get you I try
But as soon as I come close, the pond runs dry

Try as much I would never understand
The pain you feel as i leave your hand
I want to tell you that every moment I miss
The love that we had at the time of our first kiss

I hope that someday will surely come
When our love will every strife overcome
I hope that someday our hearts will surely meet
Till then like the crescent moon I’ll remain incomplete

-Collice Rodrigues
5/10/2010
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
September 15, 2011 at 8:24 AM
Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry with us today Collice. Let the words continue to flow from your pen. Love, Carol
Rodrigues Avatar
September 15, 2011 at 1:46 PM
Its nice to have you reading my poems :)
Michael Avatar
September 15, 2011 at 7:06 AM
Excellent job...
Rodrigues Avatar
September 15, 2011 at 1:44 PM
Thank you Jude....
Rodrigues Avatar
September 15, 2011 at 5:14 AM
ITS A POEM ABOUT A BOY WHO IS FEELING THAT HIS LOVE FILLED RELATION IS FADING AND SO WANTS HIS PARTNER TO KNOW HOW INCOMPLETE HE IS WITHOUT HER
Cooke Avatar
September 14, 2011 at 1:10 PM
ah so romantic, expressions of the heart, beautiful for the soul to ponder. excellent write
Rodrigues Avatar
September 15, 2011 at 5:17 AM
thank you Mr. Cooke its nice to read your comment hope you like my other poems too....i haven't uploaded many as i am just a new member to this website....ill be uploading new poems in due course of time :)
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