Ava Daley Poet Blank verse

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I thought id learnt to control the tides but this ones a hard one to please.
The eb and flow, the way she knows im conquared, i am weak
Below the surface, i take the blow that bellows out my name
a gasp, submerged and back again but breif and incomplete.
A few moons had passed since i'd heard her sing,
though her whispers echoed on,
I heard her meloncony calls each time i sang my song
The eb and flow the way she knows im conquard, i am weak,
a gasp, submurged and back again but breif and...

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Beata Agustin July 5, 2025 at 5:42 AM Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.