Incident On I-59

Headed home from a business trip
Tired, spaced out, grouchy and impatient
Pushing the limit to beat rush hour traffic
Fast closing on an old, beat up van

Suddenly blue smoke and debris flying
The back tire must have bounced twenty feet up
My first thought…'Stay STRAIGHT, you bastard!'
Careening violently left, it flipped many times
(Several objects were ejected from the doors)
My next thought, 'This is NOT my problem!'
'DAMN!' Slammed on the brakes at the last second
Then it hit me. I was the first on the scene...

I would guess it took 2-3 minute to cross over
Cars whizzing and blowing by in both lanes
Obviously it was not their problem either
(Someone else has stopped, they'll handle it!
Besides, there's a game coming on tonight) 
I waved my arms, shouting and pointing…

A woman was lying near the wreckage
wailing in robotic, shock induced screams
Left arm beneath her back with her right arm
twisted at a bizarre and unnatural angle

One man was thrown at least twenty feet off
(Ironically, he seemed the least injured)
He kept trying to get up for some reason
I rushed over and asked him to stay down
"Okay, but the baby! Where is the baby?"
('A baby, you mean there's a BABY??')
"Yes, our BABY...Please go find our baby!"
(‘Oh no, dear God please, no, NO')

The median was a wide, steep-banked grassy ditch
The van was tilted slightly sideways on its roof
Legs rubbery and trembling, stomach churning,
sweat streaming and stinging blurry eyes,
I staggered over to the wreckage, knelt down
and peered through the passenger side window
 
Empty… (‘Oh no, dear God, please, no, NO’)
Stumbling around back and then alongside,
scanning the grass and then around front
I almost tripped over it. There he was
Maybe five feet from the bumper he sat upright
still tucked safely away in his baby seat
kicking and cooing, giggling and drooling,
obviously having a wonderful time

I collapsed to my knees, bowed my head down
and feverishly began trying to unbuckle him
but quickly thought better, fearing unseen injury
Instead, I took his head gently with both hands,
kissed his forehead and nuzzled against his neck
(Babies have that particular scent, you know)

I recall glancing upward to clear blue skies,
muttering and mumbling incoherent thanks...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 4/21/2015 10:34:00 AM
wow...intense situation. I know the feeling. I was first on a scene once when a young man was ran over on his bicycle...but he was dead on impact so there was nothing to do except listen to his mom scream. It was awful. You did an awesome job retelling all this...I was glued to the story.
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Date: 1/31/2015 7:05:00 PM
Dear Tim, This is a wonderful work on this auto accident, I agree with Adrea on this fact, sorry it took so long to comment back but I've been working alot lately, so forgive me But know I will comment it just may take me a few days, I'm glad you liked my poem so much I' flattered, but your is an exellent read I'm glad I stopped by to read it, Ill save the next part for the next time I'm on, it will be a treat, cheri
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Date: 1/30/2015 8:46:00 PM
wow, GREAT descriptive writing of an auto accident, Tim. It's riveting. Let me go to next part.
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