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Incident At the Swimming Pool

Incident at the Swimming Pool By Elton Camp The public pool was crowded that July day Bruce dove into the water in his usual way He thought that he’d made quite an impression Judging by gasps and their facial expression When girls giggled and pointed right at him He thought, “They think that I’m very trim.” Bruce received more attention than other guys It certainly gave to his manly ego quite a rise As he looked around the pool with great glee A thing of his floating in the water he did see It was then that Bruce knew why they did hoot At the edge of the pool was his swimming suit

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Date: 5/24/2011 8:32:00 PM
Nice write Elton. I just hate it when that happens!
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