Incident On Highway 12, Saskatchewan 1977

INCIDENT   ON   HIGHWAY  12,  SASKATCHEWAN   1977


Black ice early morning
I heard no radio warning
Truck coming east at sixty 
Me heading west at seventy.

Closing at two hundred feet
Every second  of my heartbeat,
Ten seconds from now we will meet
At a finish line : dead heat.

Black ice is always a surprise
Unseen with the eyes  -
Begin to spin  out of control
Drawn choking  into that black hole.

Try to correct  -  impossible, 
The  surface of treachery’s  invisible.
Aim for the ditch?  Brake?
I can do nothing but slide as a snake.

Hold my breath   to think  -
He’ll   be on me in a  blink -
I slowly spiral into the oncoming fate -
He can do nothing but jack-knife it.

A voice shouts out loud for aid  -
I’m afraid  it’s my voice.  God isn’t afraid.
At  that moment  I  uncovered 
What  I’d once believed  and covered :

The  pretended atheist dropped
His  child’s toy unwanted: 
I suddenly outgrew it
In a slow-mo second split. 

I missed the truck by a yard or so.
About one fiftieth of a second to go.
I see the trucker’s  helpless  face.  
Still makes me shiver, can’t erase.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 10/24/2010 1:52:00 AM
Magnificent write and powerful experience! Can feel the adrenalin
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Date: 10/22/2010 2:48:00 PM
Yes, that is Sask. with lots of trucker's on that black ice. My son was going out to the University and hit black ice on the highway. He spun around and just missed a semi. I also spun and did two loops on that same stretch of road about 20 years earlier. Not fun to drive on. Enjoyed this write. God Bless Phyl Oh and you never brake on ice you take the car out of gear.
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Date: 10/22/2010 1:08:00 PM
Wow, Sydney....I feels like watching a movie in slow motion, and waiting for the scene to explode into a dreadful moment.... so glad it didn't end with tragedy!! This kept me glued!
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Date: 10/22/2010 12:40:00 PM
Crikey I’ve had so many close shaves over the years ! On the road and on the track but I think I’m only here through luck and skill! Maybe God doesn’t want me yet! Ha Ha !
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Date: 10/22/2010 12:37:00 PM
The story in miniature is told in the last quatrain, very scary yet touchy, Sydney
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