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Inch By Inch

falling back water envelopes me i am surrounded by nothing nothing but the quiet of the soundlessness of the confined water space it surrounds me like a coffin burying me in a stinging grave blackness enters my mind cold enters me, and starts to grind; at my bones, inch by inch away from the pain i cannot flinch it takes me over inch by inch

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Date: 6/8/2010 4:18:00 AM
Hoepefully not, Corazon Marie! Sometimes we got nightmares and when we wake up we are alleviated that it was only a dream! Well written Sonnet, enjoyed reading it and tnak you for your comment...Gert
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