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'incessant Growth'

our love unexpected intense without warning everyday new discoveries sensual moments, trust and commitment instants of gratification incessant growth combined tied together in us 250620112050 Contest: A Poem From Thee 5th Place

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/8/2011 3:08:00 PM

Enjoyed the expressions of true love..Congrats..Sara

Juanita Warden

Date: 7/6/2011 9:24:00 PM

love this..congratulations on your win.always Juanita.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/6/2011 12:25:00 PM

wowowow, wilms! so mellow...cheery congrats on your special win :) huggs!

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 7/6/2011 5:36:00 AM

Congrats my luv !!! nice to sitting on the same list as you.... love Michael

Russell Smith

Date: 7/6/2011 5:31:00 AM

congratulations on your winning poem very nice

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/6/2011 5:23:00 AM

Congrats Wilma on an excellent win for more excellent words of poetic art my friend..enjoy with luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/6/2011 4:19:00 AM

Congratulations Wilma for the win in Brian's "A Poem From Thee" contest. Love, Carol

Elaine George

Date: 7/6/2011 4:00:00 AM

Very deep and profound, Wilma. Many congrats on your SUPER WIN. Lainie

Zzzzz Zzzzz

Date: 7/5/2011 4:30:00 AM

A nicely woven piece, with sinewy, but poetic language!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/27/2011 5:01:00 AM

well instant gratification is amazing and the entire poem written in this form is stupendous..sexy.. loving .. emotion charged .. romantic.. longing with lasting quality Wilma.. u go girl.. amazing as u luv..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/26/2011 12:31:00 PM

Wow, I'm not familiar with the form, but this poem says so much about the growth and expectations in relationships. Awesome, dear friend. Love, Carolyn

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 6/26/2011 7:20:00 AM

yes indeed Wilma, Growth is incessant where Love is concerned ...whether we want it to be or not. What we get is not always what at first we see, n'est-ce pas? You knocked my socks off with this new form for me. ...A great form for these thoughts. ..new form .. huh! ... I hate it when people I like make me learn stuff! : )

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 6/26/2011 6:44:00 AM

I love this form (a must for me to try) thanks teacher.... Your words and thoughts are so real and intense... Not all sharks feed the same way love...lol... love Michael

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/26/2011 12:02:00 AM

this is really nice, wilma. Nice form of poetry that really suits your style. The unnamed bird I am guessing to be fibromyalgia. That damn bird hurts like you know what! well, you might not know. Only the "oldies" here at PS were getting the type of bird I meant. haha. Luv, Andrea

Kash Poet

Date: 6/25/2011 12:03:00 PM

A full 7 for this;)

Kash Poet

Date: 6/25/2011 12:01:00 PM

Wonderful write on Love Wilma.Another gem from you.Enjoyed.