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'incessant Growth'

our love
unexpected
intense without warning
everyday new discoveries 
sensual moments, trust and commitment
instants of gratification
incessant growth combined
tied together 
in us



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Contest: A Poem From Thee
5th Place

loverictameter

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Sara Kendrick

July 8, 2011 at 3:08 PM

Enjoyed the expressions of true love..Congrats..Sara

Juanita Warden

July 6, 2011 at 9:24 PM

love this..congratulations on your win.always Juanita.

Nette Onclaud

July 6, 2011 at 12:25 PM

wowowow, wilms! so mellow...cheery congrats on your special win :) huggs!

Michael J. Falotico

July 6, 2011 at 5:36 AM

Congrats my luv !!! nice to sitting on the same list as you.... love Michael

Russell Smith

July 6, 2011 at 5:31 AM

congratulations on your winning poem very nice

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

July 6, 2011 at 5:23 AM

Congrats Wilma on an excellent win for more excellent words of poetic art my friend..enjoy with luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown

July 6, 2011 at 4:19 AM

Congratulations Wilma for the win in Brian's "A Poem From Thee" contest. Love, Carol

Elaine George

July 6, 2011 at 4:00 AM

Very deep and profound, Wilma. Many congrats on your SUPER WIN. Lainie

Zzzzz Zzzzz

July 5, 2011 at 4:30 AM

A nicely woven piece, with sinewy, but poetic language!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

June 27, 2011 at 5:01 AM

well instant gratification is amazing and the entire poem written in this form is stupendous..sexy.. loving .. emotion charged .. romantic.. longing with lasting quality Wilma.. u go girl.. amazing as u luv..

Carolyn Devonshire

June 26, 2011 at 12:31 PM

Wow, I'm not familiar with the form, but this poem says so much about the growth and expectations in relationships. Awesome, dear friend. Love, Carolyn

Robert A. Dufresne

June 26, 2011 at 7:20 AM

yes indeed Wilma, Growth is incessant where Love is concerned ...whether we want it to be or not. What we get is not always what at first we see, n'est-ce pas? You knocked my socks off with this new form for me. ...A great form for these thoughts. ..new form .. huh! ... I hate it when people I like make me learn stuff! : )

Michael J. Falotico

June 26, 2011 at 6:44 AM

I love this form (a must for me to try) thanks teacher.... Your words and thoughts are so real and intense... Not all sharks feed the same way love...lol... love Michael

Andrea Dietrich

June 26, 2011 at 12:02 AM

this is really nice, wilma. Nice form of poetry that really suits your style. The unnamed bird I am guessing to be fibromyalgia. That damn bird hurts like you know what! well, you might not know. Only the "oldies" here at PS were getting the type of bird I meant. haha. Luv, Andrea