Incase I Actually Get Her

Don't play my heart, or break my heart
But that's like saying don't erase my scars
You can't feel happiness without pain
Have sunshine without rain
If I put you at ease, do you promise you won't make it hard?
Will you allow me to lower it in my own time?, or try to break the guard?
Force your way through the shield I have up?
Can you embrace my bipolar ways?, are you mad enough?
Am I too crazy for you to even deal with?
If I'm still numb, will you try and help me to feel this?
Will you help me to grow? Be my crutch?
If I fall will you help me up?
Am I supposed to do it alone with no guidance?
Sometimes I'll want to be home, sitting in silence
Will you tell me how you feel?, cause I'll never understand a female
I'm a man, so I'd be confused even with instructions and details 
Could you put up with my bad jokes?
Would you understand I can be happy, and still like a sad quote?
Would you be mad,if I'd rather write a poem than go to a club?
Could you accept that sometimes it takes a lot for me to hug?
Will you see my characteristics? Even when its something I don't want to show?
Would you hide it? Or allow me to know?
If she's willing to do all of this? Will my heart let her?
What if I actually get her?

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Date: 3/15/2017 5:41:00 PM
Love the title and subject :-) Intelligent questions that as you continue to grow, many will come naturally with each new phase of your life. Yet, you are talking about a girl..lol and they can render one into silly putty...as long as 'you know you', you WILL 'get' the girl of your dreams Alex :-) Wonderful, honest writing. blessings, lynn
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Alex Duffy
Date: 3/19/2017 2:54:00 PM
Thank you :) Yeah we all grow daily and our 'Flaws' grow and get easier to deal with, some things are worth waiting for that's what I've learned :) Thank you im glad you enjoyed it :)
Date: 3/15/2017 1:46:00 AM
Good questions. You will get her. You will get each other. The poem or club thing - I think the equation changes as people get older; i.e. more chance that being a poet will be just fine with her. Patience - who knows how much is required? I didn't meet my wife-to-be until I was 37.
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Alex Duffy
Date: 3/19/2017 2:56:00 PM
Thank you, Yeah the only reason that's a question is an ex got mad that I wrote so much poetry lol, Patience is key especially with love, I just hope it comes together when we're both ready mentally and able to commit
Date: 3/13/2017 1:43:00 AM
Great poem...I hope you do get her.
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Alex Duffy
Date: 3/13/2017 11:45:00 AM
Thank you, :)
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