INCARNATE

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04/29/24

This or That vol. 25

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Contest by Edward Ibeh

Life is mortal : I wish to incarnate. After death, body is buried or burnt. Wish to reborn for new life to vibrate. Don’t know, new appearance how to hunt ! Wishful thinking: Soul must be immortal. Life is mortal : I wish to incarnate. Don't know how my soul will find right portal to enter into new life to pulsate. Don't know how my soul will find right parents ! Joy and grief will come as natural gift. Life is mortal : I wish to incarnate. Life is always a challenge, I must meet. Wish to explore life again and again. New ventures in life pulls me as magnet. I will never bother for loss or gain ! Life is mortal : I wish to incarnate.

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Edward Ibeh

Date: 5/16/2024 3:46:00 PM

A refreshingly different take on the "Incarnate" theme. Nicely done, Anisha. Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest!

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 4/29/2024 7:41:00 AM

Dear Anisha, your contemplation on reincarnation digs into the essence of existence and the mysteries beyond mortality. I loved how the longing for rebirth reflects a yearning for renewal and continuity beyond the constraints of this life. Your words wonderfully filled with a profound curiosity about the cycles of life and death. - Blessings, Daniel